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A Girl Who Looks Good In a Bikini

“All a man really wants, is a girl who looks good in a bikini." - Jack Freestone A GIRL WHO LOOKS GOOD IN A BIKINI With youth this is so. So longingly leering at hourglass shape. A tan is a plus. Plus exotic or blonde hair, long and exciting. With a cocktail, a must. Must find way, to be close to her beauty. The only thing except sports. Sports swept away at the beach. Personality may be a bust. Bust still carries sway. A guy may hit rock bottom. Bottom’s up in an ocean cup. Better yet a judge…judge a bikini contest. That is a dream. Dream girl’s on display. Later in life he longs for a woman..woman with brains.

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Date: 8/30/2023 2:02:00 PM
Interesting repeat of words at the end of one sentence and the beginning of the next.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 4:41:00 PM
Thank you, Juliet!
Date: 8/16/2023 11:34:00 AM
:))) ... later in life he became a grown man .. with brain :))) - Well done, Kim - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2023 12:46:00 PM
LOLLOL! You are right!
Date: 8/16/2023 8:15:00 AM
Great contrasts. Not all females in a bikini equate with intelligence. But one can always study the menu :) Hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2023 12:47:00 PM
Truly! No one can fault a man for that. A woman likes a good looking man too :)
Date: 8/16/2023 5:48:00 AM
Haha. What can we say Kim. Nothing like a beautiful woman, for me, the pinnacle of God's creation.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2023 12:47:00 PM
The many sides of beauty…outside, inside! :) :)
Date: 8/16/2023 4:21:00 AM
Fun poem Kim…love the comments from the men!! You know what they are all about hehe!! Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2023 12:48:00 PM
HEehee…truly! :) hugs
Date: 8/15/2023 7:38:00 PM
Both brains and beauty, that's key, Kim. Have you seen Barbie? Very cute, B0l
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2023 12:48:00 PM
Haven’t seen it…but loved the dolls.
Date: 8/15/2023 7:16:00 PM
I think mem fall for hot bods all their life. Women in shape or seductive are quite attractive. Brains! I don’t think so. “Like, gee! Your sheepskin turned me on?” Bodies, hands up! Am I weird! No, just truthful. And have seen too many men in action. I am not putting men down ar all. Pangie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/16/2023 12:49:00 PM
God gave us shapes…nothing wrong with that….shape of the brain as well ;) Thanks for your great comment, weirdo ;) Just Kidding
Date: 8/15/2023 6:39:00 PM
Hate to admit it but you have us pegged to a tee.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2023 6:41:00 PM
Thank you…lol
Date: 8/15/2023 4:54:00 PM
Ain’t it the truth, Kim, A bimbo, unlike a dog, is for Christmas… not for life. Oh heck… I hope there’s no bimbos here ;-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2023 6:41:00 PM
Thank you, Terry! :)
Date: 8/15/2023 4:32:00 PM
You certainly made me smile Kim, this is fabulous I especially loved bottoms up in an oceans cup lol! hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2023 6:41:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan! xx
Date: 8/15/2023 2:15:00 PM
Oh you judge us guys harshly Kim, and quite rightly too, love the form this one takes, works just nicely, A woman with brains, you really do know all our secrets lol, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/15/2023 4:05:00 PM
LOL! Thanks, David!

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