Kim Rodrigues Poet Verse

A Girl Who Looks Good In a Bikini

“All a man really wants, is a girl who looks good in a bikini."
- Jack Freestone

A GIRL WHO LOOKS GOOD IN A BIKINI

With youth this is so. So longingly leering at hourglass shape.
A tan is a plus. Plus exotic or blonde hair, long and exciting.
With a cocktail, a must. Must find way, to be close to her beauty.
The only thing except sports. Sports swept away at the beach.
           Personality may be a bust. Bust still carries sway.
A guy may hit rock bottom. Bottom’s up in an ocean cup.
           Better yet a judge…judge a bikini contest.
That is a dream. Dream girl’s on display.

Later in life he longs for a woman..woman with brains.

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Juliet Ligon August 30, 2023 at 2:02 PM Interesting repeat of words at the end of one sentence and the beginning of the next. Kim Rodrigues August 30, 2023 at 4:41 PM Thank you, Juliet!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 16, 2023 at 11:34 AM :))) ... later in life he became a grown man .. with brain :))) - Well done, Kim - hugs Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2023 at 12:46 PM LOLLOL! You are right!

Victor Buhagiar August 16, 2023 at 8:15 AM Great contrasts. Not all females in a bikini equate with intelligence. But one can always study the menu :) Hugs Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2023 at 12:47 PM Truly! No one can fault a man for that. A woman likes a good looking man too :)

Deb M August 16, 2023 at 4:21 AM Fun poem Kim…love the comments from the men!! You know what they are all about hehe!! Debx Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2023 at 12:48 PM HEehee…truly! :) hugs

I Am Anaya August 15, 2023 at 7:38 PM Both brains and beauty, that's key, Kim. Have you seen Barbie? Very cute, B0l Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2023 at 12:48 PM Haven’t seen it…but loved the dolls.

Panagiota Romios August 15, 2023 at 7:16 PM I think mem fall for hot bods all their life. Women in shape or seductive are quite attractive. Brains! I don’t think so. “Like, gee! Your sheepskin turned me on?” Bodies, hands up! Am I weird! No, just truthful. And have seen too many men in action. I am not putting men down ar all. Pangie Kim Rodrigues August 16, 2023 at 12:49 PM God gave us shapes…nothing wrong with that….shape of the brain as well ;) Thanks for your great comment, weirdo ;) Just Kidding

Jerry Brotherton August 15, 2023 at 6:39 PM Hate to admit it but you have us pegged to a tee. Kim Rodrigues August 15, 2023 at 6:41 PM Thank you…lol

Terry Flood August 15, 2023 at 4:54 PM Ain’t it the truth, Kim, A bimbo, unlike a dog, is for Christmas… not for life. Oh heck… I hope there’s no bimbos here ;-) Kim Rodrigues August 15, 2023 at 6:41 PM Thank you, Terry! :)

Jan Allison August 15, 2023 at 4:32 PM You certainly made me smile Kim, this is fabulous I especially loved bottoms up in an oceans cup lol! hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues August 15, 2023 at 6:41 PM Thank you so much, Jan! xx

David Kavanagh August 15, 2023 at 2:15 PM Oh you judge us guys harshly Kim, and quite rightly too, love the form this one takes, works just nicely, A woman with brains, you really do know all our secrets lol, cheers David Kim Rodrigues August 15, 2023 at 4:05 PM LOL! Thanks, David!