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A Girl Finds Romance

The world was at its best time of the year, and since it was summer there was no pressure of peers. She was walking up the hill to meet the boy she recently knew. Since she had met him A week ago their romance had really grew! Her heart was beating fast, so her breaths were coming out in little gasps. The clouds above her were so clear and steamy, if only life would always be this dreamy! Her steps uphill even though it took energy and time, in her mind it was as if she was up floating on cloud nine! When their hands touched it would send A flutter through her body and warm her heart right up, just like the flowers on A buttercup. Reaching the top of the hill, there he was waiting with A smile on his face.She smiled and ran and jumped in his arms with such grace! It was as if she had just made it to last base! Sweet and special was the kiss, oh how happy was this miss !His arms around her, were enough for anybody to ground her. But she did not care, for right now life had such A bright happy glare! Her happiness could not feel any better right now, as her love put her down and took A bow!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/6/2015 10:36:00 PM
Hi Marian, I'm glad you find this group pleasing. Thank you for your kind reply to my comment. it's as sweet as your poem above. LINDA
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Marian Millerstutzman
Date: 10/6/2015 11:14:00 PM
Sorry my phones smiley face with starry eyes comments as question marks. From now on i will comment on my computer, lol
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Date: 10/6/2015 11:06:00 PM
I meant this smiley face not those question marks,my phone is moody,lol.love u ??
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Date: 10/6/2015 11:01:00 PM
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Date: 10/6/2015 10:07:00 PM
Marian, This is my warm welcome to you, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/6/2015 10:12:00 PM
Thank you so much! It is nice to be in A group with warm hearts like you! :)
Date: 10/6/2015 7:56:00 PM
Wonderful love felt here. Love some of your thoughts referring the clouds to steamy wishing life to be that way. Very nice Marian. I want to welcome you to Poetry soup.
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Date: 10/6/2015 10:14:00 PM
Thanks ,... Me too, somewhere somehow now or after no one shall lose and that way it will be... or better! :)
Date: 10/6/2015 7:35:00 PM
Hi Marian, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Marian Millerstutzman
Date: 10/6/2015 10:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, I am A single mother of A adorable boy .I love writing,always have since I was small. I was raised Amish but left when I was 23, I am 29 now....scary 30 is coming :) lol. Amish is A great life but as in every culture nothings perfect. Amish men are devout honest hardworking people and loyal.Unfortunately mine wasn't loyal.I refuse to let ANY religion overtake Gods given common sense.Therefor let's be happy :)

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