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A Girl Dreaming of Nature

Oh, moaning forest and plants comely, Birdies all murmuring a sweet chorus; Trees high above create a ceiling, The wind whispering and weeping wildly. And in my dream, I am dreaming, I am lost in a tangled green forest; And in the green, I am me, me only. Oh, blazing colors of delight, Fragmenting images so hypnotic; This fantasy haven sumptuous, A night quite bright with wild sights. I stroll about presumptuous, And I am ethereal, exotic; I love this dream, dreading daylight. Oh, little sea horse with wings, You really belong in water drifting; But like a hummingbird you drink flowers; I stand still staring at shimmering things. I am caressed by soft rain showers, And my imagination comes floating; Then sweetly, joyfully, my heart sings. Oh, moaning forest and plants comely, Birdies all murmuring a sweet chorus; Trees high above create a ceiling, The wind whispering and weeping wildly. And in my dream, I am dreaming, I am lost in a tangled green forest; And in the green I am me, me only. ____________________________ January 14, 2016 Poetry/Verse/A Girl Dreaming Of Nature Copyright Protected, ID 16-744-713-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Your Poem Is Not Trash sponsor, Marugu Mo Third Place

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Date: 4/28/2016 12:34:00 AM
wonderful win Broken. LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 4/28/2016 7:43:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the wonderful ~~
Date: 4/20/2016 10:31:00 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Broken..
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Constance La France
Date: 4/24/2016 8:39:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the awesome and congratulatins !!
Date: 2/16/2016 5:26:00 PM
Awesome unique work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2016 1:45:00 AM
Sara, thanks for the awesome and the congrats ...
Date: 2/16/2016 2:03:00 AM
Congrats on ur fine win with this awesome write Broken.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/17/2016 1:46:00 AM
Upma, thanks for the congrats and the awesome.
Date: 2/15/2016 3:35:00 PM
What a sweet fantasy. The little seahorse with wings is wonderful. I love anything with wings and in my collages I have winged women all the time. Hugs SuZ
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Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2016 4:01:00 PM
Suzanne, thanks for visiting, I just loved that image of the seahorse with wings and had to make it part of my poem ~
Date: 2/13/2016 8:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your HM win with this awesome expression and description! I really like it.
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2016 8:31:00 PM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the awesome, happy you like it !!
Date: 2/13/2016 1:20:00 AM
Thank you for the reply
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Date: 2/12/2016 5:53:00 PM
Broken, congrats on your lovely win. LINDA
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Constance La France
Date: 2/13/2016 1:12:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the congrats and the lovely !
Date: 2/8/2016 11:38:00 AM
Enchanting, fantastic imagery that really draws the reader into your dream realm. Nicely done!
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Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2016 4:06:00 PM
Brian, thanks for the lovely comment, so appreciated as you are the only comment !

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