A Girl Dreaming of Nature


Oh, moaning forest and plants comely,
Birdies all murmuring a sweet chorus;
Trees high above create a ceiling,
      The wind whispering and weeping wildly.
And in my dream, I am dreaming,
I am lost in a tangled green forest;
And in the green, I am me, me only. 

Oh, blazing colors of delight,
Fragmenting images so hypnotic;
This fantasy haven sumptuous,
      A night quite bright with wild sights.
I stroll about presumptuous,
And I am ethereal, exotic;
I love this dream, dreading daylight.

Oh, little sea horse with wings,
You really belong in water drifting;
But like a hummingbird you drink flowers;
      I stand still staring at shimmering things.
I am caressed by soft rain showers,
And my imagination comes floating;
Then sweetly, joyfully, my heart sings.

Oh, moaning forest and plants comely,
Birdies all murmuring a sweet chorus;
Trees high above create a ceiling,
      The wind whispering and weeping wildly.
And in my dream, I am dreaming,
I am lost in a tangled green forest;
And in the green I am me, me only.

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January 14, 2016


Poetry/Verse/A Girl Dreaming Of Nature
Copyright Protected, ID 16-744-713-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest, Your Poem Is Not Trash
sponsor, Marugu Mo

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 12:34 AM
wonderful win Broken. LINDA
La France Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 7:43 AM
Linda, thanks for the wonderful ~~
A. Sharma Avatar
April 20, 2016 at 10:31 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Broken..
La France Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 8:39 AM
Upma, thanks for the awesome and congratulatins !!
Kendrick Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 5:26 PM
Awesome unique work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
La France Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 1:45 AM
Sara, thanks for the awesome and the congrats ...
A. Sharma Avatar
February 16, 2016 at 2:03 AM
Congrats on ur fine win with this awesome write Broken.
La France Avatar
February 17, 2016 at 1:46 AM
Upma, thanks for the congrats and the awesome.
Delaney Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 3:35 PM
What a sweet fantasy. The little seahorse with wings is wonderful. I love anything with wings and in my collages I have winged women all the time. Hugs SuZ
La France Avatar
February 15, 2016 at 4:01 PM
Suzanne, thanks for visiting, I just loved that image of the seahorse with wings and had to make it part of my poem ~
Gentry Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Congratulations on your HM win with this awesome expression and description! I really like it.
La France Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations and the awesome, happy you like it !!
A   Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 1:20 AM
Thank you for the reply
A   Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 5:53 PM
Broken, congrats on your lovely win. LINDA
La France Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 1:12 AM
Linda, thanks for the congrats and the lovely !
Mcclain Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 11:38 AM
Enchanting, fantastic imagery that really draws the reader into your dream realm. Nicely done!
La France Avatar
February 8, 2016 at 4:06 PM
Brian, thanks for the lovely comment, so appreciated as you are the only comment !
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