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A Gift I Give To You

the pulse of night i fear it not today it comes to me in silent beats that fade a claim it stakes upon a heart of staid in rhythmic strikes of somber time to splay i clasp my hands on bend of knee and pray to walk away from death's own hopeless shade and find the path beyond the live's it slayed then blush again beyond the skies of gray i see the past as darkness lifts its veil it bids itself farewell in leaps of hope then brims within this heart i give to you a love so deep it speaks with great avail my heart i lay upon this endless scope but mere a wish is all that i can do December 29,2019

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/5/2020 11:00:00 PM

Sandy, Congratulations on your beautiful poem of hope - lovely juxaposition of night and hope.

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/6/2020 4:55:00 AM

Thank you so much Sam ... it’s my first ever Italian sonnet :)

Brenda Chiri

Date: 1/4/2020 7:34:00 PM

Sandy here to congratulate you on your placement!;) I love this!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 1/4/2020 7:36:00 PM

thanks Brenda...my first italian sonnet...i was kind of disappointed with the placement but at the same time glad because now i know i need to work harder on this form... i entered it because i wanted to know how i did on the form and i know Brian is a master of forms...hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/30/2019 8:19:00 AM

Wow! Sandra, What a wonderful gift, you have given to us. Your rhymes and content are amazing. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have Happy New year. Have a great day my friend:-) Alexis

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 11:16:00 AM

Thank you so much Alexis... this was a challenge for me to write but i did enjoy it even though it took me forever to write... Happy New Year to you as well my friend... hugs

Chris Green

Date: 12/30/2019 7:52:00 AM

Molto bello!!! Very beautiful my friend. A poem created by such an amazing talent that touches the heart and the soul of the reader. You certainly have a way of pulling at the heartstrings and creating a sigh. Best wishes in the contest.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/30/2019 11:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris...i am not sure my meter is spot on as i really struggle within meter forms...it's for Craig's contest so if the meter is off it will be n'a'd but i am ok with that, i only wrote it to support Craig's contest...it was a nice challenge and i enjoyed it regardless of how it stands up in the contest... hugs

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/29/2019 7:42:00 PM

These rhymes look so hard to write--but you did so well my friend--delivering on your theme--great imagery--evocative write, Sandy.

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/29/2019 7:52:00 PM

Thank you Vijay...it was hard for me and not sure i got the meter exactly right...i struggle most with meter than anything else... your comment brought a smile... hugs :)

Frederic Parker

Date: 12/29/2019 5:04:00 PM

you have captured me with this sublime sonnet dear poet, really well done...good luck in the contest

Sandra Adams
Date: 12/29/2019 5:08:00 PM

Thank you so much Frederic...i am lost when it comes to rhyme and meter but i tried my best for this one...your first brave comment made me smile this evening... hugs :)