A Ghostly Mirage

Marooned on a tropical isle I'm captive to an angry sea. And it feels an eternity imprisoned here without a key. Loneliness saturates my heart, but the rising tide ignores me. For the waves cannot feel my pain and have no wish to set me free. I oft see a ghostly mirage, like a vision that haunts my dreams. For it appears to be so near, and yet, no one answers my screams. A tie-dyed sky's clouding over, another storm is on its way. And it's time that I sought shelter, for tomorrow might be the day. Sleep promises to rescue me but fails to take me from this place. And just as soon as my eyes close, tears start to trickle down my face. (Quatrain) 9/19/2015
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Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 7:43 PM
A lovely read, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 7:55 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Hunjeri Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 3:58 PM
Powerfully penned. The feelings and the fears are so well expressed. I love the imagery.
Pinet Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 8:20 PM
Thank you so much Njeri, as always, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Tor Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Emile Provocative thoughts penned here. Great idea and concept. Reality brings him back from his dreams of leaving. I wonder if any of those shipwrecked on a island experienced exactly your thoughts.
Pinet Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 8:19 PM
Thank you so much Michael, I appreciate all your friendly comments. Emile.
Woods    Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Wow, the feelings of a stranded man are so well captured here. Nice write
Pinet Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 8:19 PM
Thank you Mark, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Reams Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 1:22 PM
What a sad and wonderful write Emile! What can I say more then it is just fantastic! A 7 from me!!!!!!
Pinet Avatar
September 19, 2015 at 1:32 PM
Thank you so much Tammy, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
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