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A Ghostly Encounter

One night about 25 years ago I was sat in my car at Cothelstone Dx-ing on my CB radio in the wee hours when my two dogs started to growl every hair on their bodies on end a most putrid smell entered my car I heard the sound of hoofs churning knowing it must be the headless horseman I kept my eyes down as 't is said death comes to those who look Thor in the eyes. I was unwilling to drive away as earlier I had erected an antenna outside of the car fixed to a tree the smell was almost over powering and I could feel its gaze upon me it felt as if Thor was willing me to look my dogs were whimpering then howling no way was I raising my eyes oh no!! 'T was but an hour or so till dawn slowly the smell faded and my dogs calmed down As soon as it was light enough I let them out and got the antenna down vowing never again to spend a night here thoroughly spooked by this experience I looked around and saw churned ground with clear hoof prints as the horse had milled around my car, calling back my dogs who gladly jumped in, we drove off I have returned since but only in daylight DX-ing long distance radio contacts this is a true story there are many tales of Thor the headless horseman who rides the hills from East Quantockhead through Shervage Wood past Will's Neck through Cothelstone to the Quantock edge and back all agree if you look into his eyes within a few weeks you will be pushing up the daisy's. All I can say is I have seldom been so terrified

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/27/2014 2:14:00 PM
wow, just loved this one - I read it twice. What an experience for you - scary but how exciting too
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/27/2014 2:42:00 PM
in retrospect it was exciting but not at the time lol my blood ran cold glad you enjoyed it Jack hugs
Date: 2/27/2014 5:53:00 AM
An eerie experiece for sure...It is good to be home in one's own bed at night..Thanks for dropping by to let me know that I placed in your contest..I am honored to be in the list..Thanks for the challenge..Sara
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Date: 2/27/2014 8:07:00 AM
lol indeed Sara I love high places at night you can see so far on a clear moonlit night but now keep away from spooky places your poem was a great entry you deserved a place hugs
Date: 2/27/2014 3:31:00 AM
Very eerie...I would not like to have such an experience.
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Date: 2/27/2014 4:39:00 AM
ops wrong place M.L ty it was terrifying hugs
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/27/2014 4:37:00 AM
hi David I moved on to Ham radio so can work the world now from comfort of my chair lol I went to many high spots but that was the only time I experienced an other worldly experience ty hugs
Date: 2/26/2014 10:30:00 PM
Thank you for this wonderful poem to read--twice, and recall my own days of DX-ing, back before cellular, when the world seemed so large.
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Date: 2/27/2014 4:38:00 AM
hi David I moved on to Ham radio so can work the world now from comfort of my chair lol I went to many high spots but that was the only time I experienced an other worldly experience ty hugs
Date: 2/26/2014 7:21:00 PM
OooooH, how eerie, but what an experience, you certainly have something to tell your grandchildren, also you are a good storyteller, great write Shadow....Vera.
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Date: 2/27/2014 4:42:00 AM
ty so much Vera lovely to hear from you hugs
Date: 2/26/2014 4:17:00 PM
WOW! This was some expirejce. I do believe you. I myself have been through some expirences. I ight write something about it later. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 2/27/2014 4:43:00 AM
good idea Lucilla I await it with great interest ty so much hugs
Date: 2/26/2014 8:39:00 AM
Good morning Shadow.
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Date: 2/27/2014 4:40:00 AM
hi Rick sorry for late reply have been very busy hugs
Date: 2/26/2014 1:34:00 AM
oh my GOSH, you actually sat there and smelled that and heard the dogs and felt that awful presence. Unbelievable, Shadow. and you really told this well. One of your best posts!
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:59:00 AM
ty Andrea an experience I would not wish on anyone hugs
Date: 2/25/2014 11:00:00 AM
- Wooow .... what an experience Shadow ..... really well told! - Take care of yourself! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:53:00 AM
ty Anne Lise trust you are well hugs
Date: 2/25/2014 10:29:00 AM
Could this be thriller night? Is it really true that dogs can see ghosts? I had heard this before,with this I want to believe.A good work Shadow,thank God for your life.
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:53:00 AM
yes animals are very sensitive they always know Kayod5 hugs
Date: 2/25/2014 9:51:00 AM
Scarey! I'm glad you did not look up.
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:50:00 AM
lol ty Rick hugs
Date: 2/25/2014 8:59:00 AM
you made me bite my nails with this macabre write, shadow.. strong imagery and great narative!.. pen on.. huggs!
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Date: 2/26/2014 6:50:00 AM
ty Nette hugs
Date: 2/25/2014 7:41:00 AM
This is such an exquisite tale of the headless horseman still making his rounds! I don't think I could handle such an encounter, I would be to freaked out to function at all! I am so glad you survived this meeting, it must have been so awfully scary! I surely loved reading this enlightening poem here this morning! What a brilliantly told story...made scarier knowing that it's a true story! Great Work!!
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Date: 2/25/2014 7:29:00 AM
What a terrifying yet delightful story told in a mesmerizing way! Who would be brave enough to withstand the presence of such an entity without protection from the Beyond? Beautifully done thank you Shadow you are truly the light!
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