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A Ghost Story

Spirits wander in and wander out met usually with a painful shout They give me chills but also wonder are they real or tales from dark under? This story is true, happened few years past. We keep telling so memory lasts. Four friends were at Joyce's house one day when Niece Sue stopped by on her way. Likes genealogy she says now; found great-grandma with Ancestry's prow. Her portrait is on my bookcase, Joyce notes. We'll look before leaving, a friend votes. She might have died in disgrace, Sue states: abortion is what her obit relates. Back in the year eighteen eighty-nine quite common--birth control unrefined. just then a loud crash in bookcase room-- sounds of glass breaking--impending doom! All rushed in to find, faded and worn, Grandma's portrait had been cut and torn. No living creature was in that room to push the portrait to final doom. Her spirit may have disliked words said she wants to leave that incident dead. I believe spirits are here night and day, rather not see them, if that's okay. January 10, 2022 for Angela Tune's Ghost Story Contest

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Date: 1/14/2022 12:17:00 AM
A captivating story, Ann, congratulations:)
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/15/2022 10:57:00 AM
Thanks, Jo! I love the path your poem took :)
Date: 1/13/2022 10:48:00 PM
Very interesting story. Well written. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/13/2022 1:14:00 PM
i see you got a win. Congrats for that . What is a DIL?
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/13/2022 3:06:00 PM
DIL is daughter-in-law. She's really my ex-DIL but we're best of friends. You have a beautiful mind, Andrea. Your poetry is just incredible :)
Date: 1/13/2022 11:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Ann. Falling from the wall is one thing, becoming torn and tattered, quite another. Spooky! Terry
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Date: 1/11/2022 4:20:00 PM
hey, that was a great read and a creative approach to a ghost story. Very nice.
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/12/2022 11:23:00 AM
Hi Andrea! Joyce (not her real name) is my DIL and she has seen at least 4 dead people I know of. Very spooky. She doesn't try - they just show up. That I really don't want :)
Date: 1/11/2022 11:11:00 AM
Clear that you know your subject, so doubly enjoyed, and your last line is certainly the best closer! Aloha!
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/12/2022 11:36:00 AM
Thanks, Rico ~ and yes, I really, really, really don't want to see them! My DIL--Joyce, but not real name--sees them frequently. Brrr. If they talk, I'll listen, but please don't show up :)
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/12/2022 11:31:00 AM
Thanks, Rico ~ and yes, I really, really, really don't want to see them! My DIL--Joyce, but not real name--sees them frequently. Brrr. If they talk, I'll listen, but please don't show up :)
Date: 1/10/2022 8:58:00 PM
You really had me on the edge of my seat, Ann. Very well done!... And yes, those spirits are among us. For sure. :) gw
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/11/2022 8:22:00 AM
Hi Gershon! I've had people who have passed give me messages in my dreams, but I've never seen a spirit, just know they're there. Thanks for commenting :)
Date: 1/10/2022 7:34:00 PM
Hey Ann….a great poem a. It must have been so scary! I believe in spirits also! Debx
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Ann Peck
Date: 1/11/2022 8:18:00 AM
Thanks, Deb ~ you'll probably understand this: "Joyce" (I didn't use their real names) is a sensitive and has seen spirits many times but refuses to believe. She has been given a gift and won't pursue it. I would love to have that gift :)

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