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A Ghost In My Mind

I'm calling out the masks you're wearing I don't need to do this with any swearing Your two faces don't justify you not caring Your lies are no longer worth my forbearing When you chose to take a gift that I offered freely You didn't just fail the test, you completely failed me If distance wasn't the only answer you thought you would find Congratulations on misunderstanding, you're a ghost in my mind

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Date: 3/15/2023 8:40:00 PM
Smooothe as iccce :) When the guillotine drops it doth so swiftly. Like this one AS!
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Date: 3/16/2023 1:28:00 PM
FJ that is a beautiful analysis thank you for the wonderful comment! Warmly A.S.
Date: 3/9/2023 7:42:00 AM
Ooh, slam! A beautiful eloquent slaying. xomo
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Date: 3/9/2023 7:54:00 AM
Sometimes in life you just have to call someone out.... this is me doing it with class! :P.... A.S.
Date: 3/7/2023 9:20:00 AM
Haunting, A.S., and beautiful. :)
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Date: 3/7/2023 9:29:00 AM
Thank you Paige glad you enjoyed it! Best regards A.S.
Date: 3/7/2023 6:05:00 AM
Cold bloode, AS. I love it:)
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Date: 3/7/2023 7:22:00 AM
Tick tock tick tock goes the pendulum in my clock :) glad you like this one Daniel thanks for checking it out. Regards A.S.
Date: 3/7/2023 12:22:00 AM
Wow powerful words and poem Anonomous! Enjoyed….Debx
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Date: 3/7/2023 1:58:00 AM
Thank you Deb glad to hear this one is enjoyed! Warmly A.S.

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