A Ghost In My Mind

I'm calling out the masks you're wearing
I don't need to do this with any swearing
Your two faces don't justify you not caring
Your lies are no longer worth my forbearing
When you chose to take a gift that I offered freely
You didn't just fail the test, you completely failed me
If distance wasn't the only answer you thought you would find
Congratulations on misunderstanding, you're a ghost in my mind
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Thomas Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 8:40 PM
Smooothe as iccce :) When the guillotine drops it doth so swiftly. Like this one AS!
Scorpio Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 1:28 PM
FJ that is a beautiful analysis thank you for the wonderful comment! Warmly A.S.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:42 AM
Ooh, slam! A beautiful eloquent slaying. xomo
Scorpio Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Sometimes in life you just have to call someone out.... this is me doing it with class! :P.... A.S.
Hind Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 9:20 AM
Haunting, A.S., and beautiful. :)
Scorpio Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 9:29 AM
Thank you Paige glad you enjoyed it! Best regards A.S.
Turner Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 6:05 AM
Cold bloode, AS. I love it:)
Scorpio Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 7:22 AM
Tick tock tick tock goes the pendulum in my clock :) glad you like this one Daniel thanks for checking it out. Regards A.S.
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March 7, 2023 at 12:22 AM
Wow powerful words and poem Anonomous! Enjoyed….Debx
Scorpio Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 1:58 AM
Thank you Deb glad to hear this one is enjoyed! Warmly A.S.
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