A Gesture of Gratefulness

Our family’s visit to an ashram—
Where parasitical monkeys haunt ’n hum.
Creatures known for tricks and hanky-panky.
So tussles ’tween visitor and monkey!

Monkeys win— tussles with woman or man.
Outwitting the monkey whoever can?
So woes of the devotees are many; 
There doesn’t seem to be solution any!

A li’l one came to us ’nd held her hand out;
With a bottle of water, turned about;
Came back again straight to my son swiftly
Only to look for lice ’n his hair deftly!

A surprising gesture of gratitude. 
We appreciated her attitude! 

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Composed on October 18, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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October 17, 2017 at 6:03 AM
Beatiful poem,with a great rhyme and cadence. wonxderful poem that made me smile :)
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October 17, 2017 at 6:50 AM
Thank you, Darren, for your spontaneous and hearty comments:-)
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October 17, 2017 at 6:44 AM
Thank you, Darren, for your spontaneous and hearty comments:-)
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October 16, 2017 at 2:29 PM
I love this! Fave! xomo :)
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October 16, 2017 at 4:12 PM
Thank you, my fave:-)
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