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A Gentle Touch

The sweetest thing between lovers is a touch Which means I love you to the point of overmuch Sending thrills unsurpassed Of true love that will last Through the trials and tribulations and all of life's smut

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Silent One

Date: 10/9/2017 6:20:00 AM

I found it romantic, maybe not so much the last line, that made me lol..

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/9/2017 6:24:00 AM

Can't seem to get away from it!!!! LOL

Silent One

Date: 10/8/2017 3:28:00 PM

Lol..

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/8/2017 4:40:00 PM

Did you find it humorous the????

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/8/2017 6:15:00 AM

This is a romantic write my friend! Certainly something you don't touch on very often, for most of your limericks are silly or illuminatingly funny! I thought your poem to be a grand piece, one that I have surely enjoyed this morning! What a fabulous poem, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/8/2017 6:45:00 AM

You surely are "Mr. Kindness" my friend!!! GOOD MORNING!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/7/2017 9:14:00 AM

I'm going to take a guess//Your favorite thing is caress//A rub-a-dub//in the old tub//but mightn't it make a big mess? TOUCH AWAY JACKSONE!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/7/2017 9:22:00 AM

Touching YUM!!!! Have a super duper Saturday friend!!!