Carrie Richards Poet Verse

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A Garnished Trail

I dream we'll meet across the bay
You've blazed a garland's trail
for me
Glazed stones, of lilies, pave the way
On mirrored glass, I'll sail
the sea





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Inspired by Visual # 1
Nette's Contest:Memento of Waters
3//9/15 By Carrie Richards

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Andrea Dietrich March 28, 2015 at 10:28 PM haha, I am thinking to myself, had this been my contest, you would probably have placed first. Oh my. congrats to you.

Eve Roper March 27, 2015 at 2:29 PM Very beautiful descriptive write, Carrie, congratulations on your win a 7

Sara Kendrick March 27, 2015 at 1:45 PM Ahh!! Congrats!!Sara

Kp Nunez March 27, 2015 at 9:56 AM So romantic, Carrie. Superb imagery. Congratulations! Kim :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 27, 2015 at 12:08 AM Back with my congrats, Carrie!! Hugs, Rhonda

Edward Ebbs March 26, 2015 at 8:48 PM I like this lots! Congrats on your win :)

Sandra Haight March 26, 2015 at 6:46 PM I love the way interpreted this visual, Carrie! Lovely, romantic words that sail along so beautifully! I chose this same visual, but didn't make the list. Congratulations and hugs, Sandra

Shadow Hamilton March 26, 2015 at 5:42 PM so charming Carrie superb pen 7 hugs

Robert Stoner Jr March 26, 2015 at 4:36 PM congratulations Carrie very nice write and well deserved win.

Nette Onclaud March 26, 2015 at 4:33 PM a creative take on the theme--- dream-like message wonderfully depicted... thank you for being part of my contest, carrie... rounds of applause on your fine win.. huggs

Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 3:49 PM Dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 10, 2015 at 2:25 PM Beautiful flow of imagery and words...a sure winner! Hugs, Rhonda

Emile Pinet March 10, 2015 at 12:31 PM It flows like the currents of life with a realistic crispness. Emile. #7

Jan Allison March 9, 2015 at 3:12 PM simply stunning Carrie - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx