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A Garden To Be Filled

My heart was like a garden waiting to be filled so roses and thorns entered as they willed. The thorns, they wound me but soon they leave the roses brought love that none could believe. The thorns come n go but the roses, they stay they spread happiness around me, each day. So I shall try my best to keep them inside and together we'll grow side by side.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/8/2009 5:15:00 PM
sweet verse from a sweet girl. Light & Love
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Date: 4/7/2009 1:03:00 AM
Like the intro that draws the reader in Maryam.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 4/6/2009 8:50:00 PM
"Beautiful!!!":):)~"Hello Again Talented & Lovely Maryam!!!":):)~What a wonderful write here dear lady~Actually, filled with a lot of wisdom for ones own heart~for it is much more pleasant to be surrounded by love and light~then hatred and darkness!!!:):)~And I sincerely hope that "All" are able, to find this wonderful place which You have found, before their lives are through!!?:):)~Again, as always, "My Love & Warmth To 'You & Yours,' Always, John!!!"~"Beautiful Write!!!":):)
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Date: 4/6/2009 3:37:00 PM
it's no mystery to me why God made thorns for roses. jhl
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Date: 4/6/2009 3:31:00 PM
Hi Maryam I love this poem, the roses inside will draw people to you because they will smell the sweet scent. Keep those thorns at bay. God Bless. Leon
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