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A Galloping Fiasco

The gala begins words run line for rhyme Altogether spurring one on to better minds Some try throwing like green burred blankets Bucking horse and writer blurred tactics Mounted again penning whimsical race On the backstretch of imagination Circles where all win a destination

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Audrey Haick

Date: 2/24/2010 10:15:00 AM

Hey John, my congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey

Jimmy Anderson

Date: 2/20/2010 5:29:00 PM

Hey John, Congratulations on your win in the contest. ....Jimmy

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 2/19/2010 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations to you! A very poetic win here!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/18/2010 3:32:00 AM

Bravo and drum rolls! John Beam, your poem Received Honorable Mention in the Poetry Soup member contest SPORT'S MAD? Sponsored by: Brian Strand. You reached your destination...the winner's circle. Well done! Smiles, Dane Ann

Michael Jordan

Date: 2/17/2010 4:47:00 PM

John congrats on your win in Brian's contest, God Bless, mj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/17/2010 4:37:00 PM

Congrats John on your winning poem in Brian's contest.. a wonderful write and a wonderful win from a wonderful poet.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Joyce Johnson

Date: 2/17/2010 11:48:00 AM

Well done. Congratulations on your win. Joyce

Brian Strand

Date: 2/17/2010 8:49:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest John.Rgds Brian.My latest contest Poulter's Measure is now open.

Brian Strand

Date: 2/14/2010 12:27:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest John.Rgds Brian

Marty Owens

Date: 2/13/2010 9:37:00 PM

Nice write...enjoyedl..Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/13/2010 1:24:00 PM

Thankxxx for bringing that EGO ..OGE to my attention.. never intended to do that but maybe it will give me some "brownie points"..ya think?? NOT... but I do appreciate your keen eye in noticing it.. your poem..puts a neat spin on the racetrack circuit.. u should enter it in the Sports Mad? contest... also bronco busting too but that would qualify this an an entry.. that's a sport also.. thankxx again..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.