John Beam Poet Couplet

A Galloping Fiasco

The gala begins words run line for rhyme    		                                             
Altogether spurring one on to better minds                                                                  
Some try throwing like green burred blankets        			              
Bucking horse and writer blurred tactics                                                                       
Mounted again penning whimsical race 					   
On the backstretch of imagination             		                                              
Circles where all win a destination

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Audrey Haick February 24, 2010 at 10:15 AM Hey John, my congratulations on your win in the contest! Peace, Audrey

Jimmy Anderson February 20, 2010 at 5:29 PM Hey John, Congratulations on your win in the contest. ....Jimmy

Robert A. Dufresne February 19, 2010 at 5:36 AM Congratulations to you! A very poetic win here!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen February 18, 2010 at 3:32 AM Bravo and drum rolls! John Beam, your poem Received Honorable Mention in the Poetry Soup member contest SPORT'S MAD? Sponsored by: Brian Strand. You reached your destination...the winner's circle. Well done! Smiles, Dane Ann

Michael Jordan February 17, 2010 at 4:47 PM John congrats on your win in Brian's contest, God Bless, mj

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 17, 2010 at 4:37 PM Congrats John on your winning poem in Brian's contest.. a wonderful write and a wonderful win from a wonderful poet.. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Joyce Johnson February 17, 2010 at 11:48 AM Well done. Congratulations on your win. Joyce

Brian Strand February 17, 2010 at 8:49 AM Congrats on your success in my contest John.Rgds Brian.My latest contest Poulter's Measure is now open.

Brian Strand February 14, 2010 at 12:27 AM Thank you for supporting my contest John.Rgds Brian

Marty Owens February 13, 2010 at 9:37 PM Nice write...enjoyedl..Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 13, 2010 at 1:24 PM Thankxxx for bringing that EGO ..OGE to my attention.. never intended to do that but maybe it will give me some "brownie points"..ya think?? NOT... but I do appreciate your keen eye in noticing it.. your poem..puts a neat spin on the racetrack circuit.. u should enter it in the Sports Mad? contest... also bronco busting too but that would qualify this an an entry.. that's a sport also.. thankxx again..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.