Andrea Dietrich Poet Triolet

A Gallant, Unbidden

A gallant, unbidden, appeared one night
inside my room; mere words he never spoke!
He came creeping softly in the moonlight.
A gallant, unbidden, appeared one night
with caresses so sweet I felt it might
have only been a dream once I awoke.
A gallant, unbidden, appeared one night
inside my room. Mere words he never spoke.

Sept. 21, 2017 for Broken Wing's Form U - U Pick the Form Contest
Form is Triolet with ten syllables per line. Word is Unbidden.

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Matthew Anish September 28, 2017 at 6:03 PM So - who was this mysterious stranger? This poem is quite evocative! I sent you Burnt Offering. Just check your soup mail. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jan Allison September 24, 2017 at 4:23 PM I'm not a great fan of the triolet form Andrea but YOU write them so well!!! many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy September 24, 2017 at 12:48 AM Great poem, Andrea. Congratulations.

Susan Ashley September 23, 2017 at 8:47 PM Such lovely imagery and so beautifully written Andrea. Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this amazing write!

Paul Callus September 23, 2017 at 1:17 PM Who needs words when action speaks louder, Andrea:) A lovely triolet, worthy of the high placement it received...congratulations! Regards // paul

Joseph May September 23, 2017 at 1:10 PM Congrats on your win Andrea

Eve Roper September 23, 2017 at 11:44 AM Well done, Andrea, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit September 23, 2017 at 10:55 AM Congrats Andrea!

John Michaels September 23, 2017 at 9:31 AM Nicely composed piece, Andrea. Congrats on your high-placed win! Regards, John.

Constance La France September 23, 2017 at 9:04 AM Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest, I really like this form you selected, well done !

Kim Rodrigues September 22, 2017 at 4:53 PM Lovely! Makes you feel all warm inside.

Unknown Person September 22, 2017 at 2:44 PM Well Written Andrea.. I can imagine it.

Joseph May September 22, 2017 at 9:18 AM Nicely done Triolet Andrea...best wishes

Joanna Daniel September 22, 2017 at 7:06 AM Dreamlike triolet, Andrea:)

Vijay Pandit September 21, 2017 at 5:12 PM It was a fun night--dream or not! Best wishes Andrea!

Russell Sivey September 21, 2017 at 3:42 PM Wow, you have done an excellent job with this incredible write my friend! I surely loved reading this illustrious poem here this afternoon! What s fantastic piece, you have enlightened me, and brought a smile to my face by your form, love it! Great work!!