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This is an ode to my unborn child. It is like the part 2 of my first poetic blessing titled "Blessing To My Child" I hope you enjoy it!

A Galant City Unmatches Your Greatness

You are extreme in beauty perfected by builders who constructed all your planking with pine trees from Ivory coast and made a mast for you out of the combined crafts from brown ebony and snake wood. Out of the oaks from Bashan your Oars are made and from the cypress wood of Cyprus your decks crafted and inlaid with ivory. Your awning of blue and purple fabric are from Egypt and the inhabitants of America would be your rowers. These rowers will bring you unto the high seas you’ll become full and heavily loaded in its heart the countryside shakes at the sound of your sailor’s cries and all those who handle an oar will disembark from their ships The whole of Europe is your trading partner in choice garments, Cloaks of blue and embroidered materials and multicolored carperts which are bound and secured with cords in your market place. Your deals encompasses constant exchanges of turquoise, Corals, rubies, wheat from minnith, white whool, wrought Iron, Cassia and aromatic cane. Costal lines are your trading gardens and Roman ships will be the carriers of your goods. Your captains are your wise men and your wise men are the elders of Spain and Portugal who take charge in repairing your leaks. Your skyline will shade the sun and your islands, enrich the oceans you’ll be the wealthiest in culture and diversity because of your traders and visitors trooping from all corners of the Earth. Come forth now and prosper for greatness and fortune await your enrichment.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Fleming Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 12:39 PM
What a truly enchanting poem! So richly vibrant and colourfully painted throughout - from beginning to end...Superb!! :) john.
Makama Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 6:09 AM
Oh John... You've blessed me today with your comments...
Guzzi Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 10:01 PM
Sounds like a beauty of a ship, I'd love to see a picture! Light & Love
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:45 AM
Yes Madam Debbie. Thank you for your comment
Yamin Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 2:22 PM
Beautifully expressed, a fine poem. I like it. Thanks for visiting my poem Life and for your lovely comments.
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:44 AM
Thank you so much Hamida
Onclaud Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 2:07 PM
vividly expressed in a symbolic way, funom... lovely!,, huggs
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:43 AM
Thank you a million nette onclaud...
Relish Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 11:49 AM
a beautiful poem friend... hugs
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Thank you so much Nadiya
Roper Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 9:30 AM
Beautiful descriptive poem a 7, Funom, I have always been fascinated over sailing ships there just a mystery about them. I have painted quite a few in my early years. Blessings dear friend eve
Makama Avatar
February 3, 2015 at 9:42 AM
wow! That is nice to know. I am also fascinated by them and its a wonder to think of sailing for months through Oceans... Thanks a million for your comment Eve
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