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A Funny Rhyme For Kids

ruby the ram met larry the lamb to frolic in the fields as they would hop they came to a stop because they met some eels they slithered and scurried and the two friends hurried because they didn't want to get shocked they pounced and ran screamed as fast as they can and all of the eels flocked

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Hayley Webb-Myers

Date: 6/16/2016 7:07:00 AM

I liked it. Good little rhythm to it.. In my head anyways

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2016 8:40:00 PM

Arielle, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Moon Flower

Date: 4/21/2016 9:44:00 PM

That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Arielle. :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2016 9:41:00 PM

Nice ryme for kids, Arielle,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 4/21/2016 8:40:00 PM

a merry write indeed.