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A Fugitive

FUGITIVE Live Fugitive! Nearest relative. We come close consecutive. In light you appear dark, selective and follow as disciple, protective. In dark you flee being active, Shadow sensitive, Reactive. Live! Wow! ‘My shadow, Come close and follow.’ May be long, short, wide, narrow, As light with me is able to allow, Beside, back, front, diagonal below. It will flee as dark will grow. Light and dark play so, come and go. Wow! Thrive! Fugitive! Since I am alive. In bright light you will survive. You ate ready to flee, I believe, waiting for dark to bid bye and leave. Hide and seek in day and eve. Dark makes you passive. Fugitive! Thrive! Syllable count 1-3-5-7-9-9-7-5-3-1 03/28/16 Third Place 'STRAND SELECT C' Contest by Brian Strand Second Place Contest by Julia Ward

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Date: 4/13/2016 6:16:00 AM
Congrats Anisha, with these diamond-shaped verses, with a carat of poetic richness!!! ;-)
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/13/2016 1:35:00 PM
Thanks Teddy
Date: 4/7/2016 12:09:00 PM
Anisha, thank you for the reply. LinDa
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Date: 4/7/2016 9:32:00 AM
Anisha, Congratulations on your very well-deserved win! Hope to see more of your poems in the future! :) -HANS
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:42:00 AM
Thank you so much Hans.
Date: 4/6/2016 11:57:00 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your awesome "Fugitive Win." Linda
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:43:00 AM
Thanks Linda. Love
Date: 4/6/2016 10:47:00 PM
Wonderful poem, Anisha, congratulations on your win
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:43:00 AM
Thanks Eve. Hugs
Date: 4/6/2016 2:24:00 PM
Really talented Anisha ~ Cheers
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:44:00 AM
Thanks Deepak. Best Wishes
Date: 4/6/2016 1:51:00 AM
Well shaped nuggets of monorhyme highlighting the fugitive...Congrats...
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:45:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 4/5/2016 5:50:00 PM
Congrats well written x
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:45:00 AM
Thanks Wendy
Date: 4/5/2016 5:01:00 PM
Brilliantly created, Anisha! Congratulations on your 2nd Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Sandra. Love
Date: 4/5/2016 4:03:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/7/2016 11:46:00 AM
Thanks Sara.Love
Date: 4/5/2016 12:25:00 PM
You've done wonderfully well, Anisha! Congrats on your great placement!
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Date: 4/5/2016 1:28:00 PM
Thanks Balveen. Love
Date: 4/5/2016 11:51:00 AM
Congratulations Anisha, very creative and deserving win...
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Date: 4/5/2016 1:29:00 PM
Thanks Charlie
Date: 4/5/2016 4:41:00 AM
Great work Anisha.. big congrats..
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Date: 4/5/2016 2:29:00 AM
A well-thought out poem, deserving of its second place out of seventy entries. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/5/2016 11:18:00 AM
Thanks Julia for kind consideration. Hugs. AnishaD

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