Laura Spears Poet Concrete

A Fruit

I 
                                                                            am a
                                                                     special gift to
                                                                  give to a teacher
                                                              red and round and ripe
                                                          delicious and tart and sweet
                                                      Crunchy, crispy and fun to munch
                                                      You should put me in your lunch.
                                                        I am such a very healthy snack
                                                         To keep the doctor away you
                                                            Should eat one every day
                                                              Such a treat and good,
                                                                    Good to eat

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix July 6, 2010 at 11:05 PM Very cool concrete write, Laura! Enjoyed the write and layout. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comment on my featured poem. Caroline.

Andrea Dietrich June 5, 2010 at 10:35 PM hey, I see you made the winner circle with this one. Good for you, Laura. Luv, andrea

May 24, 2010 at 1:45 PM Cute poem! Congratulations on your win in Amy's contest. Way to go. Enjoy your honor. Karen

Amy Green May 24, 2010 at 12:55 PM I KNOW how hard it is to try and do a round shape. Really good executing this one. I couldn't do it.. I tried and failed miserably. Congrats on your win!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 24, 2010 at 12:48 PM Congrats Laura on your HM in the Concrete contest with this awesome design and words... great descriptive words to chew on..haha.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

Mitch White May 21, 2010 at 7:31 PM Sweet thoughts GL to you Laura

Doris Culverhouse May 20, 2010 at 4:26 PM had me at red and ripe...Thanks for your comments. We are leaving town Saturday.

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2010 at 4:00 PM VERY nicely done, Laura. YEah, that crazy Russel. How the heck does he expect to win with his back stabbing ways? And now that everyone is on to him, there is no way he would last more than a very short time in a rematch! Luv, andrea