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A Fruit

I am a special gift to give to a teacher red and round and ripe delicious and tart and sweet Crunchy, crispy and fun to munch You should put me in your lunch. I am such a very healthy snack To keep the doctor away you Should eat one every day Such a treat and good, Good to eat

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/6/2010 11:05:00 PM
Very cool concrete write, Laura! Enjoyed the write and layout. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your kind comment on my featured poem. Caroline.
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Date: 6/5/2010 10:35:00 PM
hey, I see you made the winner circle with this one. Good for you, Laura. Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/24/2010 1:45:00 PM
Cute poem! Congratulations on your win in Amy's contest. Way to go. Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 5/24/2010 12:55:00 PM
I KNOW how hard it is to try and do a round shape. Really good executing this one. I couldn't do it.. I tried and failed miserably. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/24/2010 12:48:00 PM
Congrats Laura on your HM in the Concrete contest with this awesome design and words... great descriptive words to chew on..haha.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/21/2010 7:31:00 PM
Sweet thoughts GL to you Laura
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Date: 5/20/2010 4:26:00 PM
had me at red and ripe...Thanks for your comments. We are leaving town Saturday.
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Date: 5/20/2010 4:00:00 PM
VERY nicely done, Laura. YEah, that crazy Russel. How the heck does he expect to win with his back stabbing ways? And now that everyone is on to him, there is no way he would last more than a very short time in a rematch! Luv, andrea
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