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A frozen moment in time

When I saw the snowdrops green lips Breathless kiss nodding on a cool spring breeze Watching the petals closing slowly as twilight begins setting scenes for darkness only captures space inside a misty mountain's temple Venus your starlight brightly shines over crossing silver as you enter the oceans of a soul Bewitched by a flower dancing lost under a magic spell

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Date: 2/27/2025 11:42:00 AM
I enjoyed this soft write Liam. I am so very glad to see you are still here. I know who you are. You do not hide behind changed names or carefully worded jabs. We may not always see things the same, but we do not have to. Take care Liam.
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Date: 2/24/2025 3:49:00 PM
I got lost in your magical moment of poetic perfection Liam,
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Date: 2/18/2025 7:59:00 AM
It's nice when you break from the political stuff to write a dreamy love poem or something about nature. You excel at these Liam
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/18/2025 8:17:00 AM
Smiling bless you pal I was inspired by a snowdrop in a world of my own without any interruption from the world, thank you deeply for the wonderful comment I pray your week is blessed beautiful
Date: 2/18/2025 7:42:00 AM
- Beautiful about the first signs of spring, Liam :) - A pleasure to see you... hope all is well with you :) - hugs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 2/18/2025 8:12:00 AM
Well it was the evening and I was sitting on a rock watching the snowdrops dancing in a soft breeze so I said into myself I might paint from nature again smiling bless you pal for the heartfelt comment all is good

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