Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

A frozen moment in time

When I saw the snowdrops green lips 
Breathless kiss nodding on a cool spring breeze 
Watching the petals closing slowly 
as twilight begins setting scenes 
for darkness only captures space 
inside a misty mountain's temple 
Venus your starlight brightly shines over
crossing silver as you enter the oceans of a soul 
Bewitched by a flower dancing lost under a magic spell

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FJ Thomas February 27, 2025 at 11:42 AM I enjoyed this soft write Liam. I am so very glad to see you are still here. I know who you are. You do not hide behind changed names or carefully worded jabs. We may not always see things the same, but we do not have to. Take care Liam.

Mystic Rose Rose February 24, 2025 at 3:49 PM I got lost in your magical moment of poetic perfection Liam,

Anne-Lise Andresen February 18, 2025 at 7:42 AM - Beautiful about the first signs of spring, Liam :) - A pleasure to see you... hope all is well with you :) - hugs Liam Mcdaid February 18, 2025 at 8:12 AM Well it was the evening and I was sitting on a rock watching the snowdrops dancing in a soft breeze so I said into myself I might paint from nature again smiling bless you pal for the heartfelt comment all is good