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jack frost visited leaving fern frosted windows cat warms by the fire A late Fall or Early Winter Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by Tania Kitchin 5,7,5 verified with how many syllables (*Fire counted as 1 syllable as per HMS, the PS counter classes it as 2) 11/5/19

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Date: 11/13/2019 6:59:00 AM
Back with well deserved congrats, Jan.
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Date: 11/10/2019 8:15:00 PM
Very, very nice, my friend. Love the cold-warm contrast and the cozy cat! ~ Me-ow
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Date: 11/10/2019 8:14:00 PM
Very, very nice, my friend. Love the cold-warm contrast and the cozy cat! ~ Me-ow
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Date: 11/10/2019 6:00:00 AM
A cosy haiku. Congrats, Jan.
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Date: 11/9/2019 3:01:00 PM
Jan, you describe a very homey scene. Congrats and I'm honored to share 2d Place with you - Bob
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Date: 11/9/2019 12:22:00 PM
Lovely haiku can visualize the scene. love phyl
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Phyl:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/9/2019 9:46:00 AM
Jan, loved your “a frosty morning” with your “fern frosted windows” and smart cat ;) Congrats on your podium finish! ~Mark
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Mark:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/9/2019 1:00:00 AM
Had me seeing what I was reading and it was so good but cold!;) enjoyed the read Jan!;)
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Brenda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/8/2019 6:37:00 PM
Short sweet and right to the point. A good one.
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Bette:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/8/2019 8:42:00 AM
Beautiful imagery! Congratulations, Jan!
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:19:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/8/2019 8:12:00 AM
Back with congrats! <3
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:18:00 PM
cheers Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/8/2019 4:44:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Jan :) - happy hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Anne- Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/7/2019 10:38:00 PM
"fern frosted windows". I love it! Well done.
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:18:00 PM
I was always fascinated by them as a child Jean!:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/7/2019 7:50:00 PM
another delightful one on the winners' list. I sure enjoy these. Congrats, Jan.
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/7/2019 7:11:00 PM
Heck with the cat, you and hubby (lol) Great haiku Jan! Congrats on your win. Hugs // Charlie xx
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:15:00 PM
Thanks so much Charles:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/7/2019 4:59:00 PM
Jan, congratulations on your placement with your sweet haiku, love the imagery and pic too! :)
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Tania:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/7/2019 3:05:00 AM
Warm haiku Are you warm by the fire.CAT. Frosted windows view the world. Love. peace and Joy. Best of luck in contest CAT.
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:14:00 PM
we dont have a cat nor a real fire lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/6/2019 10:54:00 PM
Lovely... Sweet. Ann
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Ann:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/6/2019 3:04:00 PM
oh, i love this - tried twice to leave a comment for 'stripping' but it wouldn't post (loved it anyway)
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:13:00 PM
lol thanks sweet Jack:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/6/2019 2:59:00 PM
You remind me of nights when it would freeze in Tallahassee and my cats always sat next to the fire or on my lap for loving. Great entry for the contest, Jan. Wishing you success! Hugs, Carolyn
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thanks so much Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/6/2019 6:02:00 AM
I love your ebullient lines dear heart. May your winter be gentle. Love xo
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Pixie:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/6/2019 5:20:00 AM
Very good one, Jan... Love it,. Blessings,Gina
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Gina:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/6/2019 2:28:00 AM
Ah. Poetic and sweet. The images came quickly into my heart as I read.
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:11:00 PM
Thanks so much Caren:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/5/2019 7:13:00 PM
Love the imagery, Jan.
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Date: 11/9/2019 1:09:00 PM
Thanks so much Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/5/2019 4:40:00 PM
Well done! Tricky, isn't it? I had no idea "really" was three syllables until informed by the PS counter! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 11/5/2019 4:42:00 PM
the syllable counters certainly do come up with some unusual syllable counts - really is 2 to me, I check on how many syllables and soup counter and they do have such discrepancies at times, i guess its down to regional accent too:-( hugs jan x
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