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a frosty five

a frozen aria an angry sparrow barking at winter a frozen farewell a snowflake coating on fallen feathers the snow drifts an unmoving breaker patiently poised an icicle threatens the dallying drips that give it life a snowshoe rabbit eyes the carrot dark eyes watch

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Date: 1/3/2024 7:54:00 PM
A creative poem of winter that sounds silent in the singularity of animals that dare brave the snow. Well written.
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Date: 1/3/2024 4:37:00 PM
I agree with Lin...this was an ominous Haiku. I see how you got the title...that was creative. I also appreciate how it brought the five Haikus to an end with the dark eyed one. Have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 1/3/2024 3:15:00 PM
What an ominously threatening scene you’ve written, John. It builds to the climax… baited by the dark eyed one.
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