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Hello, stand up, come for a walk, Tell me about what’s going on, Tell me what’s on your mind today, The drama that has just gone, The thoughts you think everyone thinks, What you think others all say, And your feelings about each of these thoughts, These thoughts that’re eating away, You suspect of a plot said against you, Or a plot against someone you know, You’re a bit suspicious of your peers, Thoughts hidden in each empty hello, Just remember that I’m always here, That I’ll always support what you do, And know that I will always believe one person, And that one person is you. Entered into Silent One's "Together we are strong" Contest 20th March 2018 Ranked first

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Date: 3/30/2018 7:39:00 PM
This is so nice. WE all need friends like you (to ease suspicious minds) A belated congrats on your win, Lewis.
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Date: 3/24/2018 11:45:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Lewis.
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Date: 3/24/2018 9:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of support and friendship. I like your wording about feelings and thoughts.
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Date: 3/22/2018 4:06:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Lewis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 4:04:00 PM
Beautiful friendship Lewis.. Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong..
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Date: 3/20/2018 3:50:00 AM
The ending could not have been written any better.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 3/20/2018 10:58:00 PM
Thank you Caren, I'm so glad u enjoyed this write :)
Date: 3/19/2018 9:40:00 PM
Very touching, Lewis.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 3/19/2018 9:59:00 PM
Thanks Line :)

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