A Frenzied Symphony

From evening's very ground it seems
  gathering swelling sounds
waves crescendo-ing, grandeur...

appear the first colors on the horizon
  streaks of magenta lighting up 
undersides of slate-gray clouds
  powerful organ chords struck, playing
a frenzied symphony
  in an ominous sky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 4:14 AM
I feel like I have been to a lovely concert and a light show!
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2019 at 12:11 PM
You know how to make my day, Caren! Thank you so much! Happy Thursday! :) gw
Green Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 2:27 PM
"a frenzied symphony in an ominous sky" Coolest line yet. Beautiful poem GW. This was really nice.
Wolf Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 3:55 PM
If you call it a cool line, who am I to argue?! I'm on board, Captain. Thank you so much, Chris! Cheers, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 8:59 AM
You drive the emotions in boundless ways! Love it!
Wolf Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 1:02 PM
Aw, thanks, Kim. Really appreciate this comment. Blessings, Gershon
Y. Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 9:49 PM
Wow! Gershon, You painted a "symphony" of words. Great imagery my friend. I enjoyed the read. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
December 4, 2019 at 1:01 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis, for such a musical comment! Cheers, Gershon
Sands Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 7:55 PM
Wow This is great Gershon! I enjoyed this. Well written :)
Wolf Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Heidi, thank you so much for the enthusiasm. You've given me a real lift! Warmest wishes, Gershon
Foster Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 6:45 PM
I felt like the orchestra was having a battle right there in front of the man with the stick... waving it violently through the air... It was great... ... ... reading.. ... wow... the second time was even better. A fav... hugs. Ann
Wolf Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:14 PM
Wow. You've totally made my evening, Ann. TYSM!! Season's best, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 6:29 PM
Love your imagery Gershon, can just see those awesome colours. Tom
Wolf Avatar
December 3, 2019 at 8:13 PM
Awesome comment, Tom. Very much appreciated! Season's best, Gershon
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