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A Frenzied Symphony

From evening's very ground it seems gathering swelling sounds waves crescendo-ing, grandeur... appear the first colors on the horizon streaks of magenta lighting up undersides of slate-gray clouds powerful organ chords struck, playing a frenzied symphony in an ominous sky

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Date: 12/5/2019 4:14:00 AM
I feel like I have been to a lovely concert and a light show!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/5/2019 12:11:00 PM
You know how to make my day, Caren! Thank you so much! Happy Thursday! :) gw
Date: 12/4/2019 2:27:00 PM
"a frenzied symphony in an ominous sky" Coolest line yet. Beautiful poem GW. This was really nice.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/4/2019 3:55:00 PM
If you call it a cool line, who am I to argue?! I'm on board, Captain. Thank you so much, Chris! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 12/4/2019 8:59:00 AM
You drive the emotions in boundless ways! Love it!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/4/2019 1:02:00 PM
Aw, thanks, Kim. Really appreciate this comment. Blessings, Gershon
Date: 12/3/2019 9:49:00 PM
Wow! Gershon, You painted a "symphony" of words. Great imagery my friend. I enjoyed the read. Have a great evening:-) Alexis
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/4/2019 1:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis, for such a musical comment! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 12/3/2019 7:55:00 PM
Wow This is great Gershon! I enjoyed this. Well written :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/3/2019 8:15:00 PM
Heidi, thank you so much for the enthusiasm. You've given me a real lift! Warmest wishes, Gershon
Date: 12/3/2019 6:45:00 PM
I felt like the orchestra was having a battle right there in front of the man with the stick... waving it violently through the air... It was great... ... ... reading.. ... wow... the second time was even better. A fav... hugs. Ann
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/3/2019 8:14:00 PM
Wow. You've totally made my evening, Ann. TYSM!! Season's best, Gershon
Date: 12/3/2019 6:29:00 PM
Love your imagery Gershon, can just see those awesome colours. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/3/2019 8:13:00 PM
Awesome comment, Tom. Very much appreciated! Season's best, Gershon

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