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A Frame From Nature's Gallery

Sliding sun suffuses crimson color

Perfect portrait, resembles Picasso’s painting

Glowing glints and flaring flames, slowly

Dangling and drooping down for bidding bye-bye

Weary, worn sun pecks torrent tides

Silent Sojourn, at horizon hovers, 

Vacates, welcoming the diffusing dark


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Syllable Check : PS
Date: 03-12-2021
Alliterisen 2 Poetry Contest
Verse poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Joseph May 

Placed: 1st

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 1/5/2022 5:05:00 PM
wonderful alliteration and imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 1/6/2022 8:46:00 AM
Thank you so much for your best compliments.
Date: 1/2/2022 7:48:00 PM
Great alterations, Patri, congratulations on your win. Happy New Year my dear friend with lots of hugs and love
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 1/3/2022 11:07:00 PM
Very happy to receive your best compliments. Happy New Year!
Date: 1/1/2022 12:01:00 PM
Very nicely done. I love sunsets and I love your poem. congrats for top win
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 1/1/2022 11:28:00 PM
Glad to receive your compliments. Happy New Year!
Date: 1/1/2022 9:00:00 AM
Well penned Patri, Congrats on your win, Happy New Year!
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Patri Venkata Ramana
Date: 1/1/2022 11:28:00 PM
Thanks a lot for your compliments. Happy New Year!

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