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Sadness creeps in akin to an acrid taste. Magnificent dreams are now gone to waste. Fevers rage on as birds sing a song. My mind is awake, but something is wrong. Frail it becomes, this once strong mind, As doubts and fears start to unwind. Memories fade like a distant shore. Leaving me lost and wanting more. Tears fall gently, akin to summer rain. As I strain to hold on to what remains. But the world keeps spinning, never slowing. And I find myself just floating. Frailty is not a weakness but a sign of time. This a reminder that we all must decline. But in this weakness, there is still strength. A will to fight, to lead to any length. So I'll hold on tight to what I hold dear. And let the cast off the things that bear fear. A frail mind can still be strong, And with perseverance, its strength can prolong. The taste of sadness may linger long, But it can't overpower the beauty of a song. And amidst the pain and the strife, There's still a world full of life. So let your mind be Written: June 05, 2023

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