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A Four Line Poem

At the kitchen table I like to linger while I drink ginger tea Planning my weekly shopping list I must remember corn and peas.

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Candace Hodges

Date: 10/12/2016 8:09:00 PM

I do grocery shopping to, I like corn and peas but I always eat peas with carrots. This is a delightful write.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/25/2016 11:16:00 AM

Hello Candace, This poem came to me in a dream,most of my poetry comes to me in a dream. Thank you I enjoyed writing this poem.

Michael Nibert

Date: 10/7/2016 10:53:00 AM

addendum; and looking at doggie infested with fleas! ha-ha? good soup!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/7/2016 1:34:00 PM

Hello Michael,Ha,Ha.yes good soup.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 10/6/2016 6:09:00 PM

How can this be a four line poem when there are only two? Quelque chose ne cloche pas. Anyway, I am a classical music lover, always have been even as a young boy. Bach is certainly a favorite on my list, followed by Haydn, Mozart, Beethoven, Brahms and others. I take issue, not all classical music is calming. Much of Beethoven's isn't. Thank you for stopping by. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/7/2016 11:40:00 AM

What does Quelque chose ne cloche pas mean? I do not speak french,even though I have a french name.Maurice I will try again with another poem.This my first try I never did this before. Guide me. If you feel I need it.Thank you.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/6/2016 4:08:00 PM

I came back to reread this short poem after I got to know that you gave it a make-over:) You are free to change the title if you want, too:) Regards // paul

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/7/2016 1:39:00 PM

No Paul, I am not going to change the title.I am going to try again on a different scheme later on. I will try again soon.Bye for now Darlene//

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/5/2016 7:39:00 PM

Darlene, nice and simple... a delight to read. linda

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/6/2016 1:11:00 PM

Thank you Poet Destroyer I rewrote this poem I like it better now. If you see something wrong with my poems let me know and guide me. Thank you.