Anonomus Scorpio Poet Abecedarian

A Forms and Words - Absence

Absence as I hear them calling
Broken as I feel them falling
Cardiac as it's stalling
Darkness has me crawling
Endeavoring to its installing
Fevered by enthralling
Giving into it appalling
Heartfelt gifts sprawling
Individual love is worth mauling
Jointly our worth is stalling
Kissing my lips, befalling
Loving her, a load I'm hauling
Missing us forever recalling
No joy in finding the end
Openness only serves to offend
Patience is just pretend
Quietly wanting more than a friend
Reliving does not allow us to transcend
Seeking solutions, don't bend
Time there's none left to extend
Unbelievably easy to condescend
Viciousness has no way to amend
Wanting left no desire to attend
Xenomorphic this relationships bookend
You had every chance girlfriend
Zero desire is left to be penned

A Forms And Words Challenge Poetry Contest
20th February 2023
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Linda Alice Fowler March 4, 2023 at 7:18 AM Wow. Creative abecedarian end rhyme! Congratulations on your win! Anonomus Scorpio March 4, 2023 at 12:48 PM Thank you so much Linda! Blessings A.S

Sotto Poet March 2, 2023 at 10:16 AM AS, outstanding work, and many compliments on your win in my Writing Challenge - A Words and Forms. Blessings. Anonomus Scorpio March 2, 2023 at 10:42 AM Sotto, I want to thank you very much for sponsoring this competition I didn't know how badly I needed to write this piece until I started writing it. And to hold company with the names on this list from first place through honorable mentions is both humbling and inspiring! Warmest regards A.S.

Paige Hind February 24, 2023 at 11:49 AM Hey again. Thanks for all your commenting back to me. Loved your feedback with me on your poems. Anonomus Scorpio February 24, 2023 at 12:54 PM My true belief is the purpose of this website is to be both a sounding board and a means of encouragement. That is what I've taken away from it and what has been given to me from it. So anytime I can give back to the community I am more than willing to do so! Thank you very much for taking the time to read so many of my pieces A.S.

Paige Hind February 23, 2023 at 9:56 AM Wow! How did you rhyme so much?? I enjoyed reading. Anonomus Scorpio February 23, 2023 at 3:18 PM Truthfully with regards to the rhyme all I knew for sure when I started writing this was that I wanted to split the alphabet into two sets of 13 rhymes. The words just kind of flow out of me I know that's very undescriptive but it's the truth. I really wanted the reader of this poem to understand the turmoil that comes with divorce and break up. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it even though it is a difficult subject. Warmly A.S.

Daniel Turner February 22, 2023 at 5:28 PM You have done well, A.S with a very difficult form . Anonomus Scorpio February 22, 2023 at 6:00 PM Thank you very much this I consider extremely high praise! Best Regards A.S.