A Forever Promise

Anxiously the bachelor dreams 
Of a lifelong commitment
From the insidious bachelorlette, 
He proposed marriage tenderly 
Could I count on you ~
To forsake all others said she, 
He vows to do so forever, 
If she were to love, honor 
And be the best bride ever. 
They agree thus bonding 
In holy matrimony 
Husband and wife 
Were then introduced --Mr. and Mrs. 
After which family, guests 
And wedding party joined
Too, celebrate the start of 
their forever promise
Many blessings 



Adell Foster©2009 Adell1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Palli Avatar
February 27, 2010 at 6:46 AM
Can feel all the emotion
Canady Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 9:01 PM
Beauuuuti-ful ... Very Lovely Sentiments Expressed with Flair and Yes ... Many Blessing to both ... (This is going into my Fav's) MoonBee
W Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 7:55 PM
a commitment to eachother heart to live for one another well penned........................kate
Freeman Avatar
September 30, 2009 at 9:56 AM
Beautiful sentiment, forever promised, so may it be. Sincerely Moses
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 4:12 PM
Happy marriage. Keep writing. Sara
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