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A Foreshadowing

Fate; is it something near or that afar? Is it carved in stone or written in sand? Eternal wonder — space surrounds the star. Cosmos; uniquely dealt to each a hand. Dearest Mother Earth, is my father...Time? I feel that both have connections with me— this search for myself spent stuttering “I’m”... Depths of both filled with reflections of me! Fight or flight? Still; bipolar gravity— a chain of events logic can’t equate... Metaphysical or analogy? Alice? Atlas? Parallel postulate! Mysterious. Civil poor are battling. Affluence. Civil war foreshadowing. November 27, 2020 “A Foreshadowing” Edward Ibeh

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Date: 12/2/2020 12:02:00 PM
Fantastically done, Dill:-) I really enjoyed this poem! Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Dill Dennison
Date: 12/21/2020 8:46:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 12/1/2020 6:29:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Dill! Linda
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Dill Dennison
Date: 12/1/2020 2:47:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 11/27/2020 7:39:00 AM
You summed it up well in your poem Dill...
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Dill Dennison
Date: 11/27/2020 8:43:00 AM
Thank you

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