Edward Ibeh Poet Sedoka

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A Foreboding

Outside the hospice,
a crow's raucous cry portends
a stark sense of foreboding

Change is in the air
the death knell sounding at dusk
An end of a life is nigh?


BRIAN'S SELECT 4,any form,any theme
Contest Judged:  6/5/2020 (Winner: 3rd Place)
Sponsored by: Brian Strand 

GIF 2 Your Best Anything Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place)
Sponsored by William Kekaula
Date written: 04/01/2020

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Sam Kauffman April 1, 2020 at 11:28 PM Very foreboding and dark. Wonderfully written, Edward. Congratulations! Edward Ibeh April 2, 2020 at 12:42 PM Thank you, Sam:-)

John Watt April 1, 2020 at 4:59 PM Edward, a chilling but realistic sign of our times. Well penned and congratulations for this excellent Sedoka and your #1 win in GIF contest ~ John Edward Ibeh April 1, 2020 at 9:45 PM Thank you very much, John:-)

Vijay Pandit April 1, 2020 at 4:34 PM You did this so brilliantly in just a few words...the message resonates. Congrats on your first place, Edward. Edward Ibeh April 1, 2020 at 4:36 PM Thank you so much, Vijay:-)

William Kelii Kekaula April 1, 2020 at 4:06 PM Much said in brevity--nice, Edward, neatly done, worthy for 1st place, my grateful thanks for your participation, Aloha William Edward Ibeh April 1, 2020 at 4:13 PM Thank you so much for my placement, William:-) Most obliged.