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Outside the hospice, a crow's raucous cry portends a stark sense of foreboding Change is in the air the death knell sounding at dusk An end of a life is nigh? BRIAN'S SELECT 4,any form,any theme Contest Judged: 6/5/2020 (Winner: 3rd Place) Sponsored by: Brian Strand GIF 2 Your Best Anything Poetry Contest (Winner: 1st Place) Sponsored by William Kekaula Date written: 04/01/2020

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Date: 4/1/2020 11:28:00 PM
Very foreboding and dark. Wonderfully written, Edward. Congratulations!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/2/2020 12:42:00 PM
Thank you, Sam:-)
Date: 4/1/2020 4:59:00 PM
Edward, a chilling but realistic sign of our times. Well penned and congratulations for this excellent Sedoka and your #1 win in GIF contest ~ John
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Date: 4/1/2020 9:45:00 PM
Thank you very much, John:-)
Date: 4/1/2020 4:34:00 PM
You did this so brilliantly in just a few words...the message resonates. Congrats on your first place, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/1/2020 4:36:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay:-)
Date: 4/1/2020 4:06:00 PM
Much said in brevity--nice, Edward, neatly done, worthy for 1st place, my grateful thanks for your participation, Aloha William
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/1/2020 4:13:00 PM
Thank you so much for my placement, William:-) Most obliged.

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