A Force of Its Own

Does it make you happy? Or perhaps 
it excites you? To want the 
unavailable and to love the un-
lovable. To feel the way you feel for 
those that feel nothing for you. You’re 
such a foolish child, you should know 
better.

Who raised you? Who taught you 
such ways? What is it that lures you 
in, that makes you crave the 
uncravable? What scent do they give 
off that keeps making you want 
them?

You should know better. Lord knows 
you deserve better. Open up your 
heart to something bigger than 
yourself. Open your mind to a world 
unseen. Leave it all behind and 
reinvent yourself.

Those scars you keep poking at won’t 
heal unless you let them. The pain 
will never subside if you keep reliving 
the horror. Hush child, don’t try to 
justify your actions. Is a few minutes 
of happiness worth a lifetime of hurt? 
Is one moment worth a thousand 
scars? Leave those foolish ways 
behind.

She sat there wondering if one 
moment could have changed 
everything. If things would have been 
different. She wondered, if it were all 
different.. Would she be able to love 
right? Would she be able to see the 
good in people? To see the good in 
herself?

Scars and hurt caused by an 
unknown being she’d never crossed 
paths with. An unknown being that 
changed her past, her present and 
future. An unknown being that 
prevented her from loving, from 
feeling.. From seeing what’s right in 
front of her.

They say people come and go and 
leave you in all sorts of ways. Some 
change you for the better and others 
for the worst. But what about those 
that were never there and yet still 
somehow they managed to make an 
impact on your life? An impact that 
could be easily be rectified had the 
earth’s forces been kind to this 
foolish child. Can the unknown being 
be held accountable for the actions of 
the girl who’s path he never crossed?

Indie Goddess™

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/17/2014 5:11:00 PM
Hi Milika, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2014 1:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the awesome write, milika
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Date: 3/16/2014 7:41:00 PM
really good poem i like it alot
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Date: 3/13/2014 8:51:00 AM
Thank you all so much for the love I appreciate it very much, motivates me to keep writing. Is anyone having trouble accessing the site from their laptops cause every time I try so I can get a chance to read everyone's work it never loads. Thanks again for the love xo
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Date: 3/13/2014 8:34:00 AM
This is an incredible write!!!!
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Date: 3/11/2014 4:11:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Milika :) - I choose your first deep written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/10/2014 12:31:00 PM
Milika, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your way of writing. But, for the mean time, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/10/2014 9:38:00 AM
wow, love the powerful vibes from your poem, Milika, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and offer positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to my contest and poetry page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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