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A Force

He mistook her kindness for weakness. That was when she rose with eyes full of fire a song full of mirth and a heart infused with love. This same compassion that she showed others, she had learned to show herself. He hesitated... he hadn't known she was a different kind of fire... she was a different kind of love.. she was a different kind of song. The way she fought for others, she had finally learned to requite in love for herself, And that was a force to be reckoned with.

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Charles Messina

Date: 9/24/2023 4:30:00 AM

You are definitely a force to reckon with, Michelle. Sometimes it takes a while for others to see the fire in us or the songs we compose. In life, we have to love ourselves too. If we don't life could become miserable. Love this write...stay strong, dear friend. Welcome to PS :) Hugs Charlie

Michelle Dosanjh-Johal
Date: 9/24/2023 7:55:00 AM

Appreciate your kind words. Have an amazing day.

Silent One

Date: 9/22/2023 8:26:00 AM

I dont think you are a lady anyone should mess with... you are unique as shown in your poem, which you have expressed so well and now i see you have started spoken word also.. Keep flying with your positive spirit dear poet..

Michelle Dosanjh-Johal
Date: 9/22/2023 9:22:00 PM

Ah, thank you so much Silent One. Appreciate your time and your positive spirit as well.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/21/2023 3:26:00 PM

What a great poem-A different kind of fire,love,song .She learned to love herself too,and that somehow made her whole.Fantastic poem.

Michelle Dosanjh-Johal
Date: 9/22/2023 9:20:00 PM

Thank you so much. Appreciate your kind words.

Jasen Ridley

Date: 9/21/2023 9:19:00 AM

Great piece, I'm looking forward to reading more of your work. Well done

Michelle Dosanjh-Johal
Date: 9/21/2023 9:34:00 AM

Thank you so much

Kenisha Shines

Date: 9/19/2023 8:20:00 AM

just wonderful and yes kindness is a strength which weak people dont know and cannot even understand. One should respect and love oneself.Keep smiling :)

Michelle Dosanjh-Johal
Date: 9/21/2023 9:34:00 AM

Thank you for reading and reflecting.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/18/2023 1:45:00 PM

This is you in spades. We've tousled a bit but that just endears me to you even more. Firey, feisty, fun. I have a number of new ones posted you haven't read before including I dream poetry and persona non grata. Come visit Woody sometime

Michelle Dosanjh-Johal
Date: 9/21/2023 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Tom, agreed and will do!

Ink Empress

Date: 9/18/2023 10:01:00 AM

Oh my warrior poetess, how ive missed reading your poem, yes youll rise against all odds, your kindness is your strength, and you are truly a different kind of love and fire, you are the “ force” the kind of force no one can tame! I absolutely love the strngth and power of your words and how they flow so seamlessly! You are one of those gems i look upto, and get inspired to do better, cus you are stronger than you know, a poetess that would stand up for anyone that deserves a voice! Luv this

Michelle Dosanjh-Johal
Date: 9/21/2023 9:35:00 AM

Aww. Appreciate you and the feeling is reciprocal.... you are a precious gem. Grateful for you