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A Foolish Trek To the Meadow

The meadow has come alive with sight and sound As I go through the gate, I hear buzzing all around, The bees are busy working on milkweed flower Waist-high daylilies and coral honeysuckles tower, Enticing a few hummingbirds into the crowded field I snap a piece of sassafras which is carefully peeled, Soon I see three cottontails on the path up ahead About the same time, a cardinal flashing by, all red, I hear the call of a tanager and a mourning dove Today, there is so much here in the meadow to love. The narrow pathway is overgrowing with wild carrot Originally blown over here from a nearby cattle lot Breezes are stirring up the gnats and dragonflies, And I keep wiping floating pollen out of my eyes. As I expected the mother deer has weaned her fawn I’m surprised to see her here so long after the dawn, The afternoon sun beating down is now aggressive I should have known better, it’s becoming oppressive. I’ll head toward home, foregoing a walk to the river A sunstroke is threatening; I have begun to shiver.
Written July 16, 2022

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Date: 7/17/2022 10:13:00 PM
This is going straight to FAVE list of mine. Love the imagery Hank!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/18/2022 8:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. I love my treks to the meadow and to the river. I only wish they were real and not just in my head. OTOH, I can envision whatever I choose to, right?
Date: 7/16/2022 9:26:00 PM
Milton you have written such a nice poem on the wildlife that is out there for us to enjoy. You put us right there with you while experiencing everything with you. Enjoyed reading...
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Michael Tor
Date: 7/18/2022 7:22:00 AM
You are...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/17/2022 8:39:00 AM
I purposely try to make these trips to the meadow as realistic as possible. My goal is to take my reader along with me and have them experience what I am experiencing. I hope i am successful at it.
Date: 7/16/2022 7:00:00 PM
Great imagery. Out working in the heat today, had to stop a lot for water. Kinda ready for fall!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/16/2022 8:49:00 PM
Not me yet. I'll be happy to see it come September or October, but I do enjoy my summer.

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