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A Fool In Love

I staggered blindly to her arms, Forgot the hurtful past, And told myself it’s perfect now: This time it’s sure to last. It happened time and time again, I’d loved and lost and cried, A fool in love: a sacrifice. My loving, trusting heart had died. * How I felt a long time ago For Carol's Let Down contest

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John Freeman

Date: 12/2/2011 9:13:00 AM

Jack an excellent piece of your heart you left in your poem. Congratulations on your worthy poem's place. Agape, Moses

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 12/1/2011 10:11:00 PM

Very moving Jack....congrats on your win.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/1/2011 9:21:00 AM

Very poignant Jack. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/1/2011 9:04:00 AM

This is so sad and strong. Well done in the contest, Love it x

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/1/2011 8:23:00 AM

Love it Jack. Congrats on your win in Carol's contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2011 6:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in my contest Jack. You all left a piece of yourselves on this contest page. It was so very hard to judge. I am asking you all to read and comment on all the winners here. You will go away seeing into the hearts of all the winners. This was a very emotional contest for me. Thank you all for supporting this contest. Love and blessing to you all, Carol

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 11/25/2011 8:02:00 PM

I guess most of us have had our wings clipped at one time or another. You told it with such emotion though, can't help being moved.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2011 9:00:00 AM

A sad one and very well written, Jack. I wish I'd have thought how to do one for this contest!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/24/2011 9:43:00 PM

Wow, I believe this is one of the most powerful and memorable poem you have written Jack. I thoroughly enjoyed this write!! I love how you painted the fool part of the write, very, very slippery description, but did the trick!! Incredible Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2011 3:15:00 PM

Glad that it is in the past..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winners' circle one for sure..Enjoyed reading but felt your pain..Good luck in the contest...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara

Tony Lane

Date: 11/24/2011 3:05:00 PM

Good luck Jack. It sounds like a winner to me.