A Fly On the Mustache

This is a childhood story story of my teacher's face, so prominent in my memory his dense bushy mustache. Story of my teacher's face covering half of his upper lip, his dense bushy mustache it was black,drooping and deep. Covering half of his upper lip a pleasant surprise for me, it was black,drooping and deep nesting a fly after his cup of tea. A pleasant surprise for me everyday at the same time, nesting a fly after his cup of tea sneaking frequently in my mind. Everyday at the same time the fly was used to be busy, sneaking frequently in my mind overlooking it was not so easy. The fly was used to be busy my teacher never felt its presence, overlooking it was not so easy for me it was a disturbance. My teacher never felt its presence the busy fly on his mustache, for me it was a disturbance I wanted to give it a thrash. The busy fly on his mustache so prominent in my memory, I wanted to give it a thrash this is a childhood story. © kashinath karmakar (8th July 2011) ===========================
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Dufresne Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 8:50 PM
real nice job with this pantoum for the wIN Kashinath. congratulatiuons very well deserved to say the least
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 8:39 PM
Yes, it's good to see this one on the list. Congratulations. You did very well with this pantoum, taking a simple thing and making it funny. I gave myself till 10 tonight. But I am not sure I'll make my deadline. haha.
Johnson Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 7:31 PM
so a smack in the mouth, 4 the fly could be, an insult to the teacher,he:) good one mate, bit of a funny thing hey, Don
Warden Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 7:53 AM
This is so funny. Congrats on your win, Kashinath.
Mehta Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 7:20 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.D., kashinath
Brown Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 5:07 AM
Congratulations Kashinath on the win in P.D.'s "Funny Poem" contest. Love, Carol
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July 14, 2011 at 10:20 PM
Kash, once again, Congratulations on your FUNNY entry! Thank you for entering your awesome poem in my contest. Also thanks for supporting my contest. Have yourself a great and wonderful night,..p.d
K. Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 9:38 PM
Oh my gosh! hahaha! I can just imagine this, shoo fly, shoo fly, don't bother me! What a pesky fly on your teacher's mustache! Maybe he put some pomade on it?? Hahaha :D Congrats on your win here, Kash -- enjoyed this one :D
Sweetheart Avatar
July 14, 2011 at 9:14 PM
Congrats Kash on another fantabulous win in funny poem contest with this witty treat luv..
Well Avatar
July 12, 2011 at 10:30 AM
a very funny and interesting poem! congrats on your win!
Susan Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 6:06 AM
Cute poem. Congratulations on your win :)
Dailey Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 6:39 AM
You had me with the title - congratulations on the win. Mike
Horne Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 6:09 AM
LOL, I'm glad you didn't thrash the fly!!! Many congrats to you, Kash : )
Mehta Avatar
July 10, 2011 at 4:57 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Paula, kashinath
Onclaud Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:02 PM
engrossing, kashi... happy thumbs up to you on your stunning win! :) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 4:14 PM
Congrats Kash on your fabulous win with this extraordinary entry my friend.. always super ..
Brown Avatar
July 9, 2011 at 11:53 AM
Congratulations on your win Kashinath in Paula's "Childhood Memory" contest. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 9:03 PM
hello, kashi.. got a new one?? come on over!! :) huggs
Kendrick Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 2:35 PM
Good luck in the contest with this creative work..That had to be terrible for both the teacher and the students..Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
Onclaud Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 1:56 PM
ooh, i just wrote about students and profs/ teachers... fascinating offering, lashi.. winning treat to you with my huggs! :)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 12:12 PM
wonderfully written Kash ..u made that mustache come alive with your emotional pen luv.. good luck in the contest.. awesome as always my friend..luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 8:56 AM
WOW, you did GREAT with this one. Was it the mustache or the fly, the everyday item? this is so cool. WEll, I need to get out the door for my follow up dr. Appointment in half an hour. My goal was to catch up with a certain number of poems I missed yesterday but I don't think I can fulfill my goal. I wish you the best in Paula's contest. Luv, Andrea
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July 8, 2011 at 2:42 AM
That fly still roams in my mind!
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