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A Flurry of Winged Petals

Raindrops fall like nymphs darting and dodging twittering elfin echoes in camouflage dancing on my face skating on my fingernails like frozen ponds glistening in a flurry of winged petals balancing on my eyelashes like liquid orchids poised to flower their laughter muffled berries yet to blossom

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Date: 6/2/2017 1:09:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem..
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Date: 6/2/2017 8:16:00 AM
"Like liquid orchids" so beautiful! Congrats!
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/2/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 5/31/2017 4:14:00 PM
Dale, you have so beautifully described the magical, delightful presence of falling rain! Janice
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/31/2017 4:19:00 PM
thanks, Janice. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 5/31/2017 12:18:00 PM
This is beautiful Dale. So well done :)
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Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 5/31/2017 12:21:00 PM
Thank you very much, Heidi.

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