A Flower's Trick

I picked a flower today
I plucked the petal, murmuring
"he loves me"
then the second, "he loves me not"
so on and so on...
'till the last petal, murmuring
"he loves me"
My smile gets wider
and feel like I'm dancing.
It does not state facts though
yet I feel happier,
It brings joy -
A little nature trick.


15-04-09
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 24, 2015 at 8:14 AM
I like this, Charmane. A true picture of hope, wishing, dreaming.
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August 2, 2015 at 11:21 AM
yeah it is, we are doing it (my friends) for fun but I know that in our hearts it is more than just playing games.. hugz charmane :)
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