A Flower's Gift

Scarlet sage' path...
feet rambling about the hill
of a quite woodland
with Carolina willows
and southern magnolias.


Lanky short-leaf pines
shade the milk-pea verdant shrubs;
petrels watch the swift,
mottled squirrels climb black oaks
while a cavalcade stirs them.


Hyacinths in bloom
have a stronger, sweeter scent 
than the white jasmines...
is fragrance a flower's gift
to all lovers strolling by?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Freeman Avatar
March 30, 2010 at 8:34 AM
Congratulations on a most worthy display of your talent Andrew. Agape, Moses
Mehta Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 7:11 PM
Congrats - I love the last two lines
Villarosa Avatar
March 27, 2010 at 3:29 AM
A nice place to promenade, Andrew. Congratulations on your win. (^_^) Noel.
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2010 at 4:02 PM
A really cool nature picture, Andrew and big congratualtions for a big win. LUv, Andrea
Foster Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 7:27 PM
Colours, scents and wildlife. A perfect woodland scene. well done Andrew....Margaret
Guzzi Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 4:40 PM
just lovely lovely words! congrad's on your win! Light & love
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March 25, 2010 at 1:27 PM
Beautiful use of imagery for a creative view. Congratulations on your second place finish in Brian's contest. Enjoy your big honor. Keep up the good writing!! Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 9:01 AM
Congrats Andrew on your 2nd place win in Brian's contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy for this special write..luv.. Linda-Marie
Richards Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 8:33 AM
Ahh...what a beauty! Great work, Andrew. a lovely poem, worthy of the winner's circle! ~
White Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 3:07 AM
Nice path you've painted- Congrats to you
Moreno Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 2:18 AM
Andrew, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul
Strand Avatar
March 25, 2010 at 2:04 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Andrew.Rgds Brian.My latest contest ANY WHICH WAY is now open.
Tugaff Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 9:36 AM
What a lovely poem displayed in the Soupland. Keep n posting. Ernilando
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 5:14 AM
You have painted a lovely picture here. Just like my memories of the Carolinas in spring. Nicely written, Andrew. Smiles, Dane Ann
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 5:12 AM
Thank you, Andrew for your most welcomed recent comments on my “STRETCH YOUR IMAGINATION!” blog. And thank you for your entry. Smiles, Dane Ann
Strand Avatar
March 16, 2010 at 3:15 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest andrew and confrats on your recent contest success.Rgds Brian
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March 15, 2010 at 11:43 AM
What a wonderful view!! You paint a picture with words with your interesting imagery. Enjoyed this one--already have read it twice. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
Segal Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 6:59 AM
Glad i strolled by, so fragrant! love Simone
Norman Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 5:56 AM
This had made me want to go on a walk! Thank you. love and respect
Moreno Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 3:39 AM
Beautiful tanka series Andrew, loved the last one especially...Raul
Bathsheba Avatar
March 15, 2010 at 2:39 AM
I feel as though I am walking through the most beautiful garden - Thankyou for brightening up my morning - Fabulous share -:)
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