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A Flour Sack

Me bum is flat coz as a graphic designer I sat Crushed it, didn't allow for expansion, it's a fact Guess it's not a bad thing No need to put it in a sling Or walk around wearing a flour sack!

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 11/13/2017 10:02:00 AM

Another gem! I struggle with limericks, but you are one of those limerick-talented individuals who we all get to enjoy. And, I am or I do ... CayCay

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/13/2017 10:10:00 AM

You are sweet... where have you been??? Don't be a stranger! Love your name... it fits right in in! Love Jack Jack xx xx

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 11/13/2017 8:31:00 AM

Maybe a flour-sack chemise//would be a nice period piece//to deposit//in your closet//next to your Argonaut fleece. SLING ON PANCAKE-BUTT JACK!!! (whoops, I said PANCAKE again)

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/13/2017 8:37:00 AM

LOL Argonaut fleece??? Stretching a wee bit are we!!! PANCAKE BUTT JACK hERE WISHING YOU A SYRUPY DAY!!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/13/2017 6:30:00 AM

Ah, but aren't flour sacks wonderful? My grandmother, before she passed away, would tell me about times when they would make dresses out of the large flour sacks! She wore one when she was a child...it was hard times back in the 30's! What a grand poem about these sacks...to cover your bum..if you just wouldn't sit all the time! Don't worry I know what you mean, I sit on my butt all the time too, but now I lay a lot...to help my back! What a harmonious piece my friend, Great Work!!

Russell Sivey
Date: 11/13/2017 6:56:00 AM

They say I'll be "back" to normal within a month or so. Aren't I punny?

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/13/2017 6:36:00 AM

You must have really done a number on your back!!! What do the doctors say about a full recovery???