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A Flour Sack

Me bum is flat coz as a graphic designer I sat
Crushed it, didn't allow for expansion, it's a fact
Guess it's not a bad thing
No need to put it in a sling
Or walk around wearing a flour sack!

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CayCay Godwin

November 13, 2017 at 10:02 AM

Another gem! I struggle with limericks, but you are one of those limerick-talented individuals who we all get to enjoy. And, I am or I do ... CayCay

Jack Ellison

November 13, 2017 at 10:10 AM

You are sweet... where have you been??? Don't be a stranger! Love your name... it fits right in in! Love Jack Jack xx xx

Lim'Rik Flats

November 13, 2017 at 8:31 AM

Maybe a flour-sack chemise//would be a nice period piece//to deposit//in your closet//next to your Argonaut fleece. SLING ON PANCAKE-BUTT JACK!!! (whoops, I said PANCAKE again)

Jack Ellison

November 13, 2017 at 8:37 AM

LOL Argonaut fleece??? Stretching a wee bit are we!!! PANCAKE BUTT JACK hERE WISHING YOU A SYRUPY DAY!!!

Russell Sivey

November 13, 2017 at 6:30 AM

Ah, but aren't flour sacks wonderful? My grandmother, before she passed away, would tell me about times when they would make dresses out of the large flour sacks! She wore one when she was a child...it was hard times back in the 30's! What a grand poem about these sacks...to cover your bum..if you just wouldn't sit all the time! Don't worry I know what you mean, I sit on my butt all the time too, but now I lay a lot...to help my back! What a harmonious piece my friend, Great Work!!

Russell Sivey

November 13, 2017 at 6:56 AM

They say I'll be "back" to normal within a month or so. Aren't I punny?

Jack Ellison

November 13, 2017 at 6:36 AM

You must have really done a number on your back!!! What do the doctors say about a full recovery???