A Flock of Crows

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Over lambent plains of blond wheat, braided spikes rustling in flaxen breeze, a flock of crows seesaws like obsidian scythes in cider firmament under harvest sun's afternoon eye.

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Kurt Ravidas

Date: 6/1/2019 10:43:00 AM

Oh, my, the reader seats astounded, shaking his head. Cider firmament etc.! Seating, shaking his head.

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/1/2019 11:09:00 AM

Thank you, Kurt.

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/23/2018 9:38:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this profound, well-written poem! :)

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/24/2018 7:51:00 AM

Thanks, Susan!

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/21/2018 7:40:00 AM

Congrats on your top win Dale !!!

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/21/2018 8:32:00 AM

Thanks, Mike.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/21/2018 7:03:00 AM

Lovely imagery, Dale. Congrats on your gold medal win.

Dale Gregory Cozart
Date: 6/21/2018 7:14:00 AM

Thanks, Line.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/19/2018 7:52:00 PM

As Jim S. noted, very 'evocative.' Might I add 'thought-provocative and even ingeniously concoct-ative (if I may borrow some license). Fine, fine poetry. ~ Gershon