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A Flasher At a Nudist Colony

A Flasher at a Nudist Colony By Elton Camp It was a long overcoat that he wore For an act they’d never seen before Onto the grounds he slyly crept From the bushes suddenly leapt “See what you think of this,” He called out to a comely miss The overcoat he opened wide To reveal what it did hide Gasps of horror he heard that day A bashful woman even ran away The flasher stood with an evil leer That was the sound he liked to hear Underneath his coat, they did spy One fully clothed with a suit and tie

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Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/9/2013 8:29:00 PM

Very Funny indeed Excellent write love the surprise at the end!

Elton Camp
Date: 12/10/2013 1:38:00 PM

Thanks, I am surprised at the number of comments this little poem has generated, all but one favorable. Elton

Delysia Hendricks

Date: 12/9/2013 5:44:00 PM

Hahaha. You're good. you bugger. You had my mind in the gutter before the guy jumped out suit and all. WELL DONE, Elton. You're de man. Licia :-)

Delysia Hendricks
Date: 12/10/2013 2:29:00 PM

Humorous poetry is what I normally aim for and it's not easy, more so in rhythmic rhyme. I think you may enjoy a look-see at mine. Licia

Elton Camp
Date: 12/9/2013 7:48:00 PM

Thanks, I am glad that most have had fun with this little write. Humor poems are my favorite, although I occasionally write a "serious" one. Elton

John Beharry

Date: 12/9/2013 4:00:00 PM

I think your poem hits the spot very well. The title arouses curiosity. Could It be a real flasher? If so, then what effect could his act possibly have in a nudist colony where everyone is already nude with their genitals exposed? Your last line is the punch line that indicates a "reverse surprise". I am sorry to explain but this is directed to the first comment. I hope the person can see the message of your poem. Great Write!

Elton Camp
Date: 12/9/2013 5:01:00 PM

Hey John, thanks for understanding exactly what this poem is about. I'm always trying to come up with something a bit different. I love those ending "twists."

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/9/2013 7:23:00 AM

hilarious!

Elton Camp
Date: 12/9/2013 10:18:00 AM

What constitutes "flashing" depends on the point of view of the one seeing it, I guess. Thanks for reading.