Elton Camp Poet Rhyme

A Flasher At a Nudist Colony

A Flasher at a Nudist Colony

By Elton Camp

It was a long overcoat that he wore
For an act they’d never seen before

Onto the grounds he slyly crept
From the bushes suddenly leapt

“See what you think of this,”
He called out to a comely miss

The overcoat he opened wide
To reveal what it did hide

Gasps of horror he heard that day
A bashful woman even ran away

The flasher stood with an evil leer
That was the sound he liked to hear

Underneath his coat, they did spy
One fully clothed with a suit and tie

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Joseph Sergi December 9, 2013 at 8:29 PM Very Funny indeed Excellent write love the surprise at the end! Elton Camp December 10, 2013 at 1:38 PM Thanks, I am surprised at the number of comments this little poem has generated, all but one favorable. Elton

Delysia Hendricks December 9, 2013 at 5:44 PM Hahaha. You're good. you bugger. You had my mind in the gutter before the guy jumped out suit and all. WELL DONE, Elton. You're de man. Licia :-) Delysia Hendricks December 10, 2013 at 2:29 PM Humorous poetry is what I normally aim for and it's not easy, more so in rhythmic rhyme. I think you may enjoy a look-see at mine. Licia Elton Camp December 9, 2013 at 7:48 PM Thanks, I am glad that most have had fun with this little write. Humor poems are my favorite, although I occasionally write a "serious" one. Elton

John Beharry December 9, 2013 at 4:00 PM I think your poem hits the spot very well. The title arouses curiosity. Could It be a real flasher? If so, then what effect could his act possibly have in a nudist colony where everyone is already nude with their genitals exposed? Your last line is the punch line that indicates a "reverse surprise". I am sorry to explain but this is directed to the first comment. I hope the person can see the message of your poem. Great Write! Elton Camp December 9, 2013 at 5:01 PM Hey John, thanks for understanding exactly what this poem is about. I'm always trying to come up with something a bit different. I love those ending "twists."

Ilene Bauer December 9, 2013 at 7:23 AM hilarious! Elton Camp December 9, 2013 at 10:18 AM What constitutes "flashing" depends on the point of view of the one seeing it, I guess. Thanks for reading.