A Flame Once Burned

All I had to do was love her with all my heart and it would be OK.
I clung to her to save her life, as she wriggled.
Love, a propped up cardboard cutout,
Trust, her whipping boy
Hope, a bloodied and bruised up mess, with its eyes swollen shut. 
A flame once burned, my ray of hope; and she placed it beneath her spoon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Monteverdi Avatar
October 20, 2016 at 1:59 PM
This is SO beautiful. I really appreciate that you put your pain on paper and share it with the world. It's not easy being brave
Davis Avatar
October 10, 2013 at 9:11 AM
This is a very sad and painful write. Full of sorrow and anguish.
Kearley Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 1:33 AM
Hmmmm? This one really has me thinking? It's so sad,and painful...
Irwin Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 9:02 PM
Painful indeed. Thanks for reading.
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