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A Fit of Laughter

lioness finds food for her young hyenas nearby laughed Contest: Let's Get Creative With Haiku Sponsor: Constance La France March 19, 2021 Third Place Winner

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/26/2021 2:37:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. "Very Creative" Have a blessed day/weekend.............

Michael Ellis

Date: 3/24/2021 4:45:00 PM

And I like it..A Haiku is the only thing I have yet to write. You give me courage. I love the snap and pop of this Krackling poem... Delicious Cereal..

Constance La France

Date: 3/24/2021 3:27:00 PM

Alexis, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative With Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this non traditional Haiku, well done _Constance

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/22/2021 4:44:00 PM

Nicely done, Alexis! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2021 2:24:00 PM

hmm, maybe they are waiting to get those baby lions? That makes it a great dark twist!! Congrats on your win, Alexis.

Michael Ellis
Date: 3/24/2021 4:48:00 PM

Great deduction, Andrea. You said it best. Run lion run

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/22/2021 1:02:00 PM

- Back with a congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/22/2021 11:33:00 AM

love that final line Alexis you made me smile, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Ellis
Date: 3/24/2021 5:04:00 PM

I admire how she lines up the F Consonants..Quite clever

Judy Ball

Date: 3/22/2021 8:50:00 AM

Great job here. Super write. Love it. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/22/2021 3:30:00 AM

Reads like a good contender in Constance's contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 3/21/2021 6:45:00 AM

I like your witty side, Alexis :) This brings to mind; "she who laughs last..." ! ~ Best regards // paul

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/20/2021 2:21:00 PM

I think most moms are like lionesses, lol, nice sweet and lovable poem, :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/20/2021 10:30:00 AM

Oh, this is precious, Alexis! Best wishes for a win. Hugs, Carolyn

L Milton Hankins

Date: 3/19/2021 9:41:00 AM

This well-written haiku really conjures up memories of an African safari. So true of animals in the wild. The last line twist is especially noteworthy. Good luck!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/19/2021 6:59:00 AM

Good description of the wild. Thanks for reading my poem.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/19/2021 6:25:00 AM

Great imagery Alexis, the scavengers waiting for the left overs. Good luck in the contest Have a great weekend. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/19/2021 6:11:00 AM

- A creative and great haiku, Alexis :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs and happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 3/19/2021 11:34:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you stopped. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis