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A Fistful of Senryu

A fading intent Lost amid echoed voices A blurring of lines A meaningless word Adrift on a feeling Softness or sting Her eyes lied As she spoke her “truth” A lover’s denial A barb blindly tossed An unnoticed flinch An unshed tear Malnourished When the wise lack wisdom Un-nurtured youth

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Date: 2/13/2024 6:12:00 PM
I too like the second and third they are so descriptive! Love the title as well! Very creative.
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Date: 2/13/2024 2:33:00 PM
Five realistic senyrus that are seeds of wisdom. Thank you.
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Date: 2/13/2024 1:33:00 PM
a superb string of senryu John. I especially like the 2nd and 3rd ones, Ihave the Eagles song 'lyin eyes buzzing in my brain now! hugs Jan xx
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