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A Finely Turned Phrase

'Kinetic conundrums,' such a finely turned phrase, or perchance 'effervescent rhododendrons' -- their glories ablaze The Beatles' walrus cu-cu-ca-chu'd Frankie boy scooby-dooby-dooed I'd finish this poem, but it might come unglued

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Date: 2/19/2019 2:48:00 PM
ha! i enjoyed your word play, gershon!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/19/2019 4:04:00 PM
Great! (And I changed the last line, which originally read: I'd finish this poem, but far from me to be lewd). You can choose now between the two. Thank you so much, Ilene! :) gw
Date: 2/19/2019 7:16:00 AM
Talented pen :) keep the ink flowing Gershon. :)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/19/2019 11:38:00 AM
Ooooh. Greatly appreciated, Swetha. Thank you so, so much for your kind words and encouragement. ~ Gershon
Date: 2/19/2019 5:58:00 AM
You can turn a phrase so quickly, and in a whimsical way, my friend!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/19/2019 11:37:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren. I hope I don't sound too vain in stating that I am as proud of receiving this compliment as I can possibly be. It means a world to me (as I really, sincerely try hard with these poems, and it actually doesn't come naturally at all to me). Deeply, deeply appreciated! Best always, gw

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