Notes About The Poem

A Final Sundown

blooms mass in a vase
a vivid get together
days in sun recalled

wild hours of weather
when they were younger so green
remembering scenes

sunset blooms laughing
comparing lovely costumes
in a fragrant room
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Y. Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 5:29 PM
Hi Evelyn, You've penned a lovely string of haikus. I enjoyed the view. Well done. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
Buehler Avatar
March 27, 2023 at 11:49 PM
Thank you very much, Alexis. Your words inspire me. :)
Rolland Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 8:09 PM
just love it, sweet and delicate, thanks Evelyn
Buehler Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 9:43 PM
You're very welcome. Thank you for your kind appreciation. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 10:54 AM
loved your haikus.
Buehler Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 11:13 AM
I'm glad. Thank you. :)
Daniel Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 12:33 AM
Great set of haikus, Evelyn:)
Buehler Avatar
March 23, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Thank you, Jo. :)
Conn Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 6:03 PM
Nice. The third (still life) verse my favorite.
Buehler Avatar
March 22, 2023 at 8:20 PM
I appreciate your positive comments very much, Chris. :)
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