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A Final Adieu They Parted

Sun light 
   escapes
      between 
dramatic dark clouds 

ships sail
in the distance 
  away 
from waves of the sea

   adieu 
      sigh 
she sites

   cold 
      wind
         blows

  on shore
in tall sedge blades 


1/15/2022
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Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 6:29 PM
this is SO poetic, Eve!!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 16, 2022 at 12:35 AM
A sad parting. Very well transcribed. Hugs
Brown Avatar
January 15, 2022 at 4:17 PM
Nicely penned...Blessings ~ Debra
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