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A Fierce Love

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Love at first sight, please? Did not believe in it! I thought just a tease. Then it became what? Magnetic! Begging her, on my knees. In our eyes, mad, frenetic! True love, mutual, O jeese! Passion so strong, so energetic! Exploring each other with ease. Our endotoxin hit, pyrogenetic! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
3/6/18 10 lines 5 words III - Poetry Contest - Sponsoed by Laura Loo

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Date: 4/9/2018 10:14:00 PM
A fun read. Congrats on your well deserved win, Mick.
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Date: 3/30/2018 4:58:00 AM
Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Mick - all the best to you, my friend! :-)
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/30/2018 6:58:00 AM
Many thanks kind sir, best Easter wishes... Mick
Date: 3/21/2018 6:40:00 AM
romantic and passionate, true love comes when we least expect it, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/21/2018 8:56:00 PM
Many thanks iuloo, appreciated.. Mick
Date: 3/6/2018 9:57:00 AM
Love is invisible my friend.. and it can hit you at any time.. nice poem..
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/21/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thanks Silent. Invisible and silent.
Date: 3/6/2018 8:51:00 AM
I enjoyed this passionate piece.
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Mick Talbot
Date: 3/6/2018 9:36:00 AM
Richard, Many thanks, appreciated... Mick

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