Mick Talbot Poet Rhyme

A Fierce Love

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Love at first sight, please?
Did not believe in it!
I thought just a tease.
Then it became what? Magnetic!
Begging her, on my knees.
In our eyes, mad, frenetic!
True love, mutual, O jeese!
Passion so strong, so energetic!
Exploring each other with ease.
Our endotoxin hit, pyrogenetic!

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3/6/18
10 lines 5 words III - Poetry Contest - Sponsoed by Laura Loo

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Line Gauthier April 9, 2018 at 10:14 PM A fun read. Congrats on your well deserved win, Mick.

Gregory Richard Barden March 30, 2018 at 4:58 AM Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Mick - all the best to you, my friend! :-) Mick Talbot March 30, 2018 at 6:58 AM Many thanks kind sir, best Easter wishes... Mick

Beautiful Scars March 21, 2018 at 6:40 AM romantic and passionate, true love comes when we least expect it, thank you and congrats :)-luloo Mick Talbot March 21, 2018 at 8:56 PM Many thanks iuloo, appreciated.. Mick

Silent One March 6, 2018 at 9:57 AM Love is invisible my friend.. and it can hit you at any time.. nice poem.. Mick Talbot March 21, 2018 at 8:55 PM Thanks Silent. Invisible and silent.

Richard Lamoureux March 6, 2018 at 8:51 AM I enjoyed this passionate piece. Mick Talbot March 6, 2018 at 9:36 AM Richard, Many thanks, appreciated... Mick