A Few Monoku

Just wondering if snails ever think of leaving home.

Snails take carrying a mortgage to a new level.

Has anyone ever seen a homeless snail?



John G. Lawless
5/18/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Callus Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 5:51 AM
Cute and witty, John, and enjoyable :) Regards // paul
Wolf Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:34 PM
How do you repo the mortgage of a snail?! lol. :) gw
Mcintosh Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Love it! So adorable. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
Turner Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 5:38 PM
Gives new meaning to the the word "housebound". Love the humor, John:)
Allison Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 3:10 PM
haha ha yeah homeless snails are called slugs lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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