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A Few Monoku

Just wondering if snails ever think of leaving home. Snails take carrying a mortgage to a new level. Has anyone ever seen a homeless snail? John G. Lawless 5/18/2021

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2021 5:51:00 AM

Cute and witty, John, and enjoyable :) Regards // paul

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/19/2021 5:34:00 PM

How do you repo the mortgage of a snail?! lol. :) gw

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/19/2021 5:35:00 AM

Love it! So adorable. God bless you friend. Love, Gina

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/18/2021 5:38:00 PM

Gives new meaning to the the word "housebound". Love the humor, John:)

Jan Allison

Date: 5/18/2021 3:10:00 PM

haha ha yeah homeless snails are called slugs lol:-) hugs Jan xx