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On her front porch, enclosed by wooden railing, She sits on a wooden high back cushion chair with a book on her lap. A few moment to relax after her daily household tasks. To escape into another world to walk through, she tries to read, But feels the welcoming cool blanket breeze. Silence of human sound, just the chiddik, chiddik of the tree sparrows, The unfenced sweetness of nature around her home takes her away. She finds herself thinking of someone, Someone she loves, Like she's done so many times before. She tries to forget, that their world was altered forever But It just makes her ruminate of them the more. A playful brown tabby kitten pouncing at her feet, Brings her back, Away from her thoughts. 10/23/2022 photo 1 Painting prompted Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Lisa YY

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Date: 10/29/2022 10:23:00 PM
Picturesque illustration. Nostalgic as well. Congratulations!
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Date: 10/25/2022 4:44:00 AM
This is beautiful , congrats
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2022 7:36:00 AM
Thank you. Many blessings my friend
Date: 10/24/2022 11:03:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting. God bless you.
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2022 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Beata. Many blessings my friend
Date: 10/24/2022 4:22:00 AM
Perfectly written for the picture, Eve. I saw the image before seeing the image...very nicely done. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings my dear friend :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2022 7:37:00 AM
Thank you, Charles, it means a lot for the kind words. Many blessings my friend
Date: 10/24/2022 2:15:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Eve :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2022 7:38:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Many blessings my friend
Date: 10/23/2022 10:39:00 AM
- Lovely written, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/23/2022 8:56:00 AM
Eve, you conveyed feelings of magnanimity and gentleness. A beautiful poem. Blessings.
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2022 7:38:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. Many blessings my friend
Date: 10/23/2022 3:53:00 AM
So gracious and sweet feelings. A wonderful poem. Hugs.
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2022 7:35:00 AM
Thank you, Victor, it means a lot coming from you. Many blessings my friend

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